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Iris Heartfang


I'm here to set the bar, just sit back and watch... how I live!♪

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Under the warm light of the setting sun, Rainbow Dash finally confesses her feelings to her longtime crush Fluttershy, and to her delight Fluttershy returns her affections! But it's not long before Rainbow's mind is racing with every mean thing she's ever said or done to Fluttershy, forcing her to wonder if she could even be a good girlfriend to her. It's up to Rainbow's friends to set her straight and help her realize she's the perfect paramour for Fluttershy!

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Excellent story! Wasn't quite sure how first person Rainbow Dash was going to be pulled off, but I think you nailed it. I also loved the little bit of Starlight Glimmer/Trixie pairing you snuck into here. Very much appreciated and makes me want to go find some fics of the two. As for your story, it was quite sweet, and I gotta say, I really enjoyed the dialog driven story. I think description heavy stories (which I feel like mine sometimes lean towards) can sometimes disrupt the flow of dialog (depending on writer). For this story though, it flowed naturally. So great job!

Comment posted by Iris Heartfang deleted Aug 28th, 2018
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