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Midknight Defender


Game quote: It took ninjas riding basilisks to stop me. I can be proud of that.

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This story is a sequel to Hope for the Future


Twilight finds herself in charge of Canterlot for a week, so her mentor can finally take that vacation with her sister she's been waiting so many centuries for. But the nobles are being difficult, the staff has questions, and the griffon ambassador is being tetchy.

And now some strange creature has appeared. Is Equestria being invaded?!


Just a silly sequel to Hope for the Future since so many liked it, a few people asked, and I finally had an idea.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 29 )

Aaaahhh... Fresh meat!

I didnt see the original till i saw this one pop up in new but i quickly read the first one and enjoyed it. And this one is shaping up to be just as amusing as the first.

So cute! How big is Twilight compared to the human in this fic? If Celestia is the size of a dog, she's got to be like the size of a cat. Probably room up there for more than just Twilight and Spike, I'm just saying.

This... is so f:yay:ing adorable and sweet!!! :pinkiehappy:

I can just visualise it in my head and I swear that this is probably the fastest way to diabetes. (Apart from being in physical presence of the ponies)

FLUTTERSHY YAY ACTIVATE .........yay.........

What episode is the cover picture from?

Need to see more chapters of this, it is funny and a good read.

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I honestly don't know. I cropped it from a still found on google. I just wanted something of Twilight being snuggly to fit the theme.

Good, i was waiting forma the sequel :D.

I love this! Thank you!
I am instantly reminded of this!
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Hey, that's about the size I had pictured.

This would make for a great series

No words. No fricking words for how adorable this is. And I've seen anime kawaii shit. This is by far one of the cutest and funniest things i've read in a long time

Wasn't expecting to see Stella in this. She's quite a bit tamer this time around though.

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Well, she's not mine, but Flammenwerfer was okay with it after she kinda forced her way from a passing reference to a cameo in drafting. And most of her speaking parts in this are addressing a princess...she has a foul mouth, and she's not shy about using it around princesses, but she's still a loyal guard pony, so it seemed to me she'd be less likely to call a princess a saggy-flapped cunt with goat bollocks for brains unless given cause.

If we'd seen her and Luna prior to the start of this story? I'd bet the walls in that room are still blushing.

The cuddle pile is glorious! :yay:

Lovely chapter hope there's more!

Ii wish for more please

How did Raven rate getting into the cuddle pile?

Good story, really enjoyed it.

"Shit, no. The fuckin' cook said t' tell ya they still got 40 cakes to dispose of."

That's as many as four tens! And that's terrible!

so much cuteness, room spinning, things going darkkkkkkkk.

I wonder how long Rainbow could hold out ??

AJ

This is extremely well written, intelligent, and cute. Do I need to say more?

AJ

"They still want to know what to do about all the extra cake. They can't leave it laying around; something about the Canterlot Health Inspector visiting this afternoon. Wouldn't want the palace kitchens to lose their food service license; that could take a month to sort out."

I think it's time to deploy... The nasty patty.

"Side Bargain?" At Raven's nod, Twilight facehooved. "I'm not spending two million bits on lavender paint and tapestries. That's ridiculous!"

This is one of those things where at first glance you might think this sort of thing couldn't exist in the real world, could it? Yep... it can and it does.

"'e's still a cunt, but 'e did suggest you might want me to summon the troops?" The lieutenant quirked an eyebrow. "I'd say add some bloody fruit if ye mean to feed them cakes to the bats, but we could make yer 'too much cake fer me fuckin' flanks' problem disappear. Especially if I c'n get them fuckin' papayas to disappear, too... "

Is this a cockney accent I hear?

AJ

Finished! This was a pleasure to read. You know these characters so well that it's *exactly* like watching the show. One of the well-written, intelligent episodes *cough* *early seasons* *cough* (IMHO) anyway. I've got more to say but I'll take it to Discord :raritywink:

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