Keep doing the chapter because it is good even a bit about rudely or sexual.But still it is good.

Just keep doing what you're doing it's great so far I love stories like this.

I love everything about this. I want it to continue.

“Sadistic and probably homicidal?” I said to myself, missing Pinkie Pie’s response.

“What did you just say!?” Nightmare Moon shouted as she suddenly appeared in front of me in a flash of light.

“Pudding…” I dumbly replied.

I died there! X'D

Fuck it,” I sighed as I swear I heard something snap. Before anyone could comment or stop me, I reached forward, grabbing the sides of Celestia’s head and brought her in for a quick peck on the lips.

“Taste like frosti—“

That takes true courage its just like him to do this for he's is the element of courage

Me agrada el chico

Lawl.

*face-palm* ... You used the cliche of "follow the main mlp timeline except add an extra character". However, I'm gonna give this a chance since the main character wasn't willing to accept the... "7th" ... element, but if the next chapter follows the next mlp episode without trying to branch out in an AU with originality, my interest will be killed.

Hmm, a seventh element story. How... cliche.

May be a cliche but so far it’s a good story.

Pretty well written and fairly descriptive. Great start!

I'm expecting a lot of cliches and just wish thinking things in this story, so not really putting much hope in it being good.

At the same time, the start does show some...promise. Let's see how deep this rabbit hole goes.

“And Chris, who faced impossible odds against a pack of timber wolves to make sure we could move forward, represents the spirit of… courage! ”

YYYEEEEEEEEESSS!!!!!

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Y’all just hating!

Y’all have no idea how much I love these kind of stories!

“Fuck it,” I sighed as I heard something snap. Before anyone could comment or stop me, I reached forward, grabbing the sides of Celestia’s head and brought her in for a quick peck on the lips.

(Laughing) OHOHOHOH NOOOHOHOO!!!