The next three chapters will be submitted over the next three days, to assure they're of a more polished state. Enjoy the first chapter for now, and Happy Hearth's Warming or Merry Christmas to all!

OOOOOO BUDDY!

Oh this is amazing. Please continue.

Nice start! Looking forward to the next few chapters.

speaking of blue balls. shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit. gonna have to wait 3-4 days to get to the pic's story. what kinda tease is that legion :c

Finally some Sunburst/Flurry Heart. Man was is naughty stallion/filly foalsitting shipping long overdue since a year ago. Glad to see that I'm not the only one that ships Sunburst-chan with Older!Filly Flurry Heart.. Can't wait to see more. :D

YASSSSSSSSSSSSSS, I've been waiting for something like this

Okay you got my interest.

Please learn how to format your paragraphs properly. Nothing breaks a good fic like poor formatting >_<

Does enjoying this story make me a bad person. I feel like a bad person for likeing this story.

I want to see the aftermath where Shining "Captain of the Guard" Armour realizes that some putz fucked his literal infant daughter.

This is a fun read, love how it's going so far. I wonder what will happen when Candence and Shining find out about his acts against Flurry, I am guessing that there is going to be a new gelding wizard in the castle soon.

Squicky story, and I hope nothing like this ever makes the featured box ever again.

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It's a gross story about an adult fucking a child. So yes, probably.

People who make shit like this, should be crucified for their degenerate sins.

EDIT: A lot of salty people defending a story that advocates paedophilia (whether fictional or not)
Tis but another brick in the wall of reasons why most people don't like bronies (and I am saying this as a partial-one) all because of the actions of a few

Also people taking edgy bait seriously lmao, but in all seriousness, the writer should have seriously reconsidered this before pressing that upload button.

Don't like paedophiles, never will, doesn't matter if they are fictional characters or not either, but I am not going to implode people's mind in how paedophilia is essentially rape (but this is inb4 everyone brings up the xd "you play a vidya where you kill people!!!" forced meme, like they're soccer mothers incarnate)

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Wow. What a rational, measured response. Calling for painful death for someone who writes something, fictional for the record, that you don't like. Only wish I could downvote your hateful comment more than once.

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Says the guy who plays gta. Et tu, brute?

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If it does I'll save you a sit on hell right next to me, friend.

Do not place me in the same box as anyone making wishes of death or dismemberment or any such.

I Simply do not like this story. I do not like this Sort of story. Regardless of it being about two non humans, it is still a story about an adult, placed in a position of power and authority, using that as leverage [Along with his superior size and mental capacity] to have sex with a child.

I wish no ill on the Author.
I simply wish that this story did not exist.

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Not in the slightest. We can't help what we like; better we find our enjoyment in fiction than repressing it (as most do, sadly) risking trying to find it in reality.

Not really my cup of tea but it was nice so far. I would of course love to see some diaper stuff.

Also your image links do not work I am not sure if that is intentional or not.

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If you consider that a fictional story of magical talking underage horse is even remotely reminiscent of a real life case of abduction, abuse, death threats and murder that is going on with real pedophiles, I'm pretty sure you need help, as you are clearly someone who is sick in the head. If this isn't the type of thing you enjoy, no worries! Just close it and move on with your miserable life. If you are at a point in your life where in order to better yourself and give yourself that much assurance to put a borderline death threat on an author for writing something that they wanted to publish, on Christmas of all times, I seriously feel sorry for you.

Go outside, get friends, get a job, and do something for yourself instead of living off of other's who provide for you and who's only form of enjoyment is through hate.

Side note, great story @legion!

I don't like these stories, and I'm not like others that just dislike this for being one of those stories

 So, I'll just say that this is well written and even if I'm very unhappy to see such things even existing, I will give it a like for a very good written chapter and start with much detail. If I was one of those who criticize because they do not like this type of stories, then you’d probably get a hate comment and a dislike. But I don’t look at the genre, I look at the story, and how its written. I deeply in my soul hope you will use your skills for other stories will less of this.

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Hmm degenerate such a strong term now if your so zealous about your 'threats over a book no less then riddle me this oh you hypocritical soul how do you explain Japan the legal age for sex in Japan is 13 so you complain about this story to make yourself feel high and mighty but come to terms that you live in a world where this happens and the fact you posted your comment in the first place after reading it. you say we are deluded but you are the one who took the time to read and then crucify an author that you generalise as a pedophile where this person could very well be the exact opposite and actually dislike pedophilia but wrote it with either inspiration or superior demand do you know that pornography became more popular because it was in high demand like this the goal on this site is to get featured so you read whats trending and then write a story appealing to the demand so you rant and rave all you like but while your at it decide to fight companies businesses who sell retail goods appealing to the populous to make money so really the only fool is you because you read the story then decided to create flame bait so yeah some may be bucked in the head but you take the cake not to mention how you word your comment could indicate a Catholic belief but here's another fact the Catholic church is one of the biggest offenders of what you so hate and yet you are a follower so your no better then the people you hate.

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I shall be tracking in anticipation!

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The Apogee story had at least the benefit of the girl being Legally and Biologically of age in universe.

THIS IS THE FBI, OPEN THE DOOR AND COME OUT WITH YOUR HANDS UP OR WE WILL OPEN FIRE!

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You seem to have forgotten your footnotes, what is griffon style?

I'm calling the police
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I just want to remind you this is how you're spending your Christmas.

What is this? One of my favorite ships by LegionofPony? Sign me the fuck up!

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This is my first time commenting on something like this, but I agree that things like this should not exist, pedophiles should not exist. I can't bring myself to read things like this intentionally. This literality makes me sick to the point that I throw up. Also crucifixion is to good a punishment for pedophiles, I can't even see people like that as human.

Everything after the first paragraph read in a cold tone

And for those of you who think I am just some guy or other people with problems sitting at home doing nothing or whatever or with nothing better to do and acting all high and mighty. KNOW THIS I have a damn good reason for my hatred, have something like this happen to you at a young age and see what its dose to you, its different for everyone but one common thing is a deep seeded hatred for pedophiles and anything like it. So it should be vary obvious what I mean by "have something like this happen to you".

This is glorious.

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If you don’t like this kinds of stuff then why did you still read it? just let us be us and we’ll let you be you.

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You're partially right.
One typically common thing is a deep seated hatred of real pedophiles/hebephiles/the like.

Nice work. Looking forward to more.

Is it sad that I've spent more time reading comments on this story than reading the story itself?

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I'm calling bullshit mother 1ucker

"Oh Celestia...I said Flurry's name when I...and fantasized that I was with...with her !"

Yes you did, Sunburst...yes you did.

Shining said, but Sunset drifted out as he felt his eyes drifting to Fleur again,

You mean Sunburst?

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Nope, his focus is shifting back to the mare in heat, more than what Shining is saying.