Back in the library tree Twilight sat there with confusion on her face “Lavender? I never sent……. OH, MY GODDESS HE COULD SMELL IT!”

I imagine when she said that her face was red like a tomato for multiple reasons if you catch my meaning

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Kid, you make it sound as if every single anthro story is bad. And to prove my point here's to name but a few.

Star Eater
Wolf Among Ponies & Wolf Among Caribou

<3

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and to be honest. I chose anthro because I am too lazy to remember to use pony anatomy.

Could use some help with grammar, but it's pretty decent.

A dragon pony; more specifically a dragon unicorn is called a kirin. It can also be part Pegasus or ox. It is known for having a horse shaped body with dragon features ex. A scaly hide and a pair of horns and talons. They are also known for having a firey mane, slitted eyes and pointy teeth.

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That was my original idea. However I am utilizing some description from another story that I love "Equestrian Journey" by DFatman. (You should check it out, amazing read) kind of a shout out to him. I just really like the lore that he built, so I kind of incoprated a bit of it into my head cannon. Silver may be making a few more appearances in the future. He is actualy my Boyfriend's OC

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I am working on improving that. I have had terrible luck keeping editors for some reason. I am currently using an exciting program called Grammerly go edit my stories. He has a nifty tool built into it to help with grammar and word choice.

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That is a common misconception. Kirin are their own mythological race that were sometimes revered as gods and in appearance are more commonly like a cross between a deer and a reptile. Most other renditions are from modern media ie author's, artist's, and director's headcanons.

I took a deep breath and was about to start walking to my destination when the sobering thought hit me. I began to mutter to myself“Of course you dumb ass, you didn’t ask where this mare is supposed to live, and of course Princess Trollestia didn’t give me the info. She probably did that on purpose too.” I started to walk off the platform when I bumped into a blob of bright pink; before I could apologize, I heard a loud gasp. I now found myself looking at what appeared to be pink clouds in the shape of a pony dissipate into thin air.

your missing a space here

A voice to my right spoke up “yea, Pinks will do that do ya.” The scratchy yet feminine voice came from higher in the air. Turning to find the source I found myself looking at another mare. Her cyan coat matched rather well with her rainbow-colored hair, and her rose-colored eyes looked like she could be a descendant of Celestia. Much like most of the female population that I had run into, which for some reason happens more often than running into stallions, she was quite attractive in her own way, a slender athletic build… Okay so I’m full of shit, she’s knock out. She held herself with confidence, she seemed to exude an air of ‘I will challenge you to anything and beat you at it.’

she’s a knockout

I sighed, I was still getting used to ponies thinking I was some kind of hairless ape “No, I am a human. As far as I know, I am the only human in Equestria. I had no idea that Spike was a dragon, I meant no insult to him for the misunderstanding. Now if you would be so kind, could you direct me to Miss. Twilight Sparkle’s home?” She nodded.

humans ARE ape’s scientifically speaking , Ape (Hominoidea) is a superfamily and is made up of the families Hylobatidae and Hominidae. Within Hominidae there are four genera: Pongo, Gorilla, Pan, and Homo. we belong to the last one.

I didn’t notice the entendre until Rainbow jumped on it, completely missing the comment about my being Twilight’s personal guard. “Ohhhh, I get you. You like the egghead types. You have good taste, if Twi were a bit more into sports, I would see if she was interested in a date.”

I think you mean Double entendre

I was still muttering to myself a few moment later when Rainbow zipped up next to me “s..sorry about that.” She wiped a tear from her eye “you just made it too easy. Besides, it will still be faster if I show you the way. She lives in the city Library, perfect place for an egghead.”

I don't think ponyville is largenough to be a city in fact I think without the mayor they'd barely classify as a village, so I’d go with town. You know the amount of shops VS homes is odd I have a theory about that, what if ponyville is a pseudo tourist trap for ponies in between canterlot, lospegasus and applewood. Its just far enough from all those places that you'd almost certainly have to stop there and with a shop like the cake’s and a spa to visit it's certain to attract a lot of people just waiting for the next train.

Her comments about being an egghead were beginning to get to me “you know it isn’t very nice to call your friends eggheads you know. It’s rather rude.”

he said “you know” twice you should erase the last one.

She stood up slightly dazed and looked over at me and shook her head “Naw I do that the time” She grinned.

that all the time

The door to the library slammed open as a purple unicorn mare came out with a fire in her eyes “DASH IF I HAVE TOLD YOU ONCE I HAVE TOLD YOU 1251 TIMES. DO NOT PRACTICE YOUR STUNTS RIGHT NEXT TO MY LIBRARY!!!!” Looking over at us, she noticed that Dash wasn’t alone and her face lit up with a blush now realizing that it wasn't just Rainbow outside.

you kinda repeat yourself there.

Her smile vanished, and her face paled “S.s.she asked you to be my what?!”

“I. I’m finished with the room down… what are you reading?!”

“With that line of logic, how did I just summon this glass of water? As you can see, I don’t have a horn, and I don’t have any other kind of catalyst that I channel magic though. Now to be honest with you, it is easier to do it without a catalyst. However, by not using one, you have far more options on how to use it.” Her eyes seemed to brighten; I could tell that she wanted to learn.

I think you meant “it is easier to do it with a catalyst”
also did you see this video or was this a coincidence?

Bringing myself out of my perverse thoughts I decided to ask “So why was it that you didn’t Spike to clean that room down there? From what he said, he didn’t even know about that room till after the Princess told him about it?”

you didn’t ask Spike

“I’m sorry about taking your private study room. If it’s too much of a bother, I can look for other loggings in a few days. You know to minimize the impact on your life.”

lodgings

Her face was still beet red. “n.no that’s fine. If the princess wants you to live here, I will just adapt.”

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Again, thank you so much for your help. I will work to make this story as good as it can be. It really seems like a lot of my issues come from grammar and syntax. Luckily I have a program that helps out a lot with that, even if I do have a few things slip through. So again thank you for the assistance. and I never have seen that Video before. I just always felt that if we as humans were able to use magic, that we shouldn't need some kind of catalyst to do so. So in this case, yes it was a simple coincidence. lolz

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Is the basement where Twilight kept all her janky old books we may never know

I the tackyest collored alicorn vilian shall now leave this story alone and head off to find another story to spread the chaos
Says in the distance while walking away “no one shall find my secret”

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I believe Star Eater is actually Humanized not Anthro.

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You are correct. Star Eater (another fic I love) is humanized. Not anthro.

Making my way through the halls back to my room, I reflecte on the last few weeks. I had made a few good friends here. I would count Shining among them, even if he is my commanding officer. His assistant Silver Lining was a good guy as well. Silver was a cool guy in his own right, I mean it’s not every day in Equestria that you get a chance to meet and even befriend a Drony.

Yeah they aren't called drony. They are called Kirin.

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I explained this here. I just like that term a bit more. It's a personal preference in term.

Her masturbation room...

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Nooo, its her private Study Room. You know, for... Research...

Now I have a question. Does Shining Armor know about this development? Because if he did, I am pretty sure he would have a 'tough big brother' talk (and threat) before Mag came here.

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he was not told.

what kind of anthro are these pony this is my third time rereading this fic and if i was to go with the 5 to 1 scale 5 being human and 1 being pony i think they are either a 3 or 4

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I would put them on a 4 with that scale.

I smirked and turned to the exit. Turning back to her right as I left the room, I commented, "Sure, I will grab a sandwich for you. Funny, I thought you would have been more of a lavender mare. Thanks for adding the sent to the room. It smells great." With that, I left the tree and ventured out into the village to find food.

didn't she tell him what she used it for DUH!!!!!!!!!!!!!1