Mágos Schmidt is a demigod from Camp Half-Blood that has earned a favor from the gods. Rather than ask for the expected gift of godhood. He asked for a new life away from drama that it is to be a demigod in the modern world.
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Before I read this this story better not be another anthro sick and minded mother f****** gay ass story cuz I'm tired of all the anthro MLP Stories being sick minded so I'm going to give it a try then I'm going rate
I'm a huge Percy Jackson fan, and am definitely liking what you've done so far. I'm interested in seeing where this story goes.
Good start, would benefit much from an editor. Even if you can't find one, keep it up!
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Definitely not the plan. I hope to keep it in the same tone as the Percy Jackson series. Of course a bit more mature. But nothing disturbing
I like the Percy Jackson stories and movies and this is pretty good so far but I have to ask, will this be a harem story?
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I don't plan on it being one.
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Well you did put it in the Harem folder so yeah.
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I didn't add this story to any groups. Not to my knowledge at least
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Not from my feed section. You put it in the Human x Anthro in multiple folders. No wait someone named Sargent... Something did.
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My feed some Serjeant guy did it. I have revoked submissions. Thanks for the heads up
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It just got real!
Is mag a oc or someone from the books that idk about?
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He is an OC. Figured with so many demigods running around I could make one up and still have him fit into the mythos
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I forgot which got hecate was been awhile since I did a deep dive into the mythos
what wait for him?
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I love it.
this is cool more pls
Keep an eye out everypony. I should have a new chapter out tonight or tommrow. Just need to do some clean up
Stammering and the like is marked by dashes not periods, like so: "O-Of c-course your highness."
Other than that, I've noticed a couple grammatical errors here and there, but are largely minor. Most I can say is that it seems like an interesting start, and I would like to see more of it.
wait are you trying to say he's not experienced in the voice of a mother or that he is because the way it’s written is really strange.
whas that on purpose?
I’m surprised that he didn't bring up the camp's name, because if you think about it it's not named camp demigod, It’s named camp half-blood like the gods who named it only saw them as half gods and nothing more. kinda like vegeta's personality 16:15
did you mean to say his mother's name there?
I think Ares children can also do that, sorta it only seems to be for those who died during a battle and only to fight but It is still controlling them. Infact Frank Zhang was able to control ghosts and skeletons of ancient Roman Legionnaires though he can't seem to summon them so if he already has the bones nearby he can control them but only Nico seems to be able to actually summon them from anywhere.
Ah the Kusarigama the weapon they gave michelangelo after they realized that Nunchaku were a terrible weapon.
still a weird way to present a stutter this guy 8602935 was right.
great, I spent ten minutes looking up thera powers and now I want a fic of Leo Valdez in avatar the last airbender or korra, I can't wait for general fiction to be a thing.
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Thank you for the feedback. I have tweaked the first one you pointed out to read a little better.
as for the weird stutter thing, I had changed it in later chapters but forgot to come back and fix it here. that is done now.
for the third one, I took your advice and changed it to say Half-bloods. I agree that it makes more sense
for the fourth one, yes. Yes, I did mean to have Hectate's name there. thank you for finding that.
I added a little line that hints at the others but doesn't go into detail due to it not really being relevant to the story.
As always I welcome constructive criticism on the story. It will help the story to get some polish and make the story overall better. So again Thanks for the support.
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Klaus i though Klaus was dead didnt he blow himself up at the end of that easter egg
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Tis I the tackyest colored alicorn villian who posts random comments on unsuspecting storys
Muahahahahahahaha
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i is a confused pony
I forgot why I stopped reading this story. Thanks for reminding me. Please take this down vote.
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The numbers Mason, what do they mean!!
Wait till you see the Pinkie Promise. It won't even let you die to escape from it.
the math on those hours would be 49,920 which is 80 hours away from being 50 K so i commend you on your math skills
Ok, so this is a love letter story. One where the author is so enthralled with Equestria that the character dances in a happy daze though the story.
I know you a total of five minutes, and even though I know that goddesses are evil bastards, I pledge my immortal soul in your service. Yeah.
Now that being said, if you put aside all the sucking up, these stories really can be fun and entertaining. So while I am pointing out the obvious elephant in the room, that doesn't mean that this is a bad story. So, Im in this for at-least ten chapters, then I'll give you a more founded opinion.
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"I understand killin’ but I sure as hell don't understand you sheltered bastards.” -ThePhoton