Mechanical Soul

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punygoblin

punygoblin #1 · Nov 17th, 2017 · · · Prologue ·

Interesting, love the concept can't wait for more.

Auxiliary Nexus

Auxiliary Nexus #2 · Nov 17th, 2017 · · · Prologue ·

This story looks awesome. I like the vigilante thing you have going on here. Sadly, there will eventually be a point where he'll gain too much notoriety and be forced to reveal himself to the public.

I always liked the idea of people using supposedly evil powers on the side of good. Things like dark magic and necromancy are way more entertaining than rainbow beams.

OrcaBrony

OrcaBrony #3 · Nov 18th, 2017 · · · Prologue ·

Intresting, im going to keep my eye on this story

Auxiliary Nexus

Auxiliary Nexus #4 · Nov 27th, 2017 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

He should really leave a note about the crimes his victims committed. He kills bad guys, but they still look like good guys in the eyes of the public, and I don't think that's fair. He shouldn't just kill them, he should ruin their names and let the world see what they did.

AmethystAce

AmethystAce #5 · Nov 27th, 2017 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

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I might do that later, but the original idea is that these beings escaped all scrutiny. The only ones who will truly believe that they are truly evil are the victims and the dead. But, Grim might do just that when the law gets a little too close for comfort. Thank you for your continued reading.

FlyboyMuffins