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This story is a sequel to An Evening At The Bar


During a sleep over, a previously revealed factoid, that Pinkie has a varying level of attraction towards her friends, is brought up and mulled over. The girls decide to give Pinkie permission to express her affection for them whenever it strikes her.

She proceeds to do just that.

[Takes place before Season 7]

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Comments ( 49 )

They knoweth not what they unleashed.

This could go in a million directions.

....

And I'm pretty sure I'll enjoy all of them.:pinkiehappy:

Oh boy Dash you have NO IDEA how many things in the episodes can be used for this. I am really looking forward to the times Pinkie messes with Dash about this. Gonna have to favorite this just to see for any chapters of that.

Flashing forward then....

They've unleashed a fuzzy pink storm.:pinkiecrazy::rainbowderp::facehoof:

I feel like you need to write a story focusing on Flutterbutt. ‘Cuz Afternoon in the Summit doesn’t have enough of that.

Hehehe, Butterflut.

Jokes aside, you’re a good writer and you can write organic, actually-funny-and-not-lolsorandomXDXD-funny dialogs. Why aren’t you more popular.

WHY, IN THE NAME OF FUCK, ARE YOU NOT MORE POPULAR?!

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Woah. Well, aren't I flattered. Okay, I might have some reasons:

Slow updating, you should see some of earlier stories I submitted except you can't because I unsubmitted them out of shame... hmmm.

Humans? I sometimes human. And OC. And OC human.

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Egal! You’re still good at this game!

HA!!! That was priceless at the end.

I about died laughing when Pinkie started singing about Rarity's rump. :rainbowlaugh:

The internal monologue is very well-done and feels perfectly in-character. I like that the viewpoint remains fixed on Rarity through the chapter; it helps to keep the audience guessing, leaving readers as uncertain about how far Pinkie Pie intends to take this as Rarity is.

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*takes notes*

Yep yep, that's exactly what I was doing. Goodness, yes, limiting perspective and all that good stuff.

Planned that the WHOLE time.

Well, that went well.:rainbowlaugh: And yes, definitely raunchier. Here's hoping Rarity's zonked out enough from her meal that she won't quite retain that blue-ovaries sensation in the morning.

Food sounded great too.

Omg this was perfect! Love it 10/10 Pinkies:pinkiehappy:

Dang.... she’s good. Cadance... you got some competition.

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Pink ponies, man. Gotta be careful with ‘em or they’ll take your heart.

Pinkie is a minx lol.

If this keeps up, it could get really awkward by the time Pinkie gets through this cycle....:raritystarry::ajsmug::twilightblush::yay::rainbowkiss:

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You do know Starlight hasn't done anything like that in two seasons, right?

Plus, Twilight has caused more problems them her with magic.

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I really should establish when my story takes place, shouldn't I? It's set before... Season 6, I think?

*looks something up*

Season 7. Okay, gonna write this down.

Hmm, I wonder how Fluttershy would have reacted if Spike hadn’t already gotten her all worked up. Ah well. Three down, two to go....

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Wait, do all earth ponies have two hearts? (Did I ask this before?)

The reason I know this already is because your mice formed a secret police and are ratting out all the other animals. This is less of an animal farm and more of a social commentary on tyrannical dictatorships via woodland critters.

Does your father bleed history too?

Hey there! Did you like any concepts presented in here? Think you write something interesting with it yourself? Go for it, braheim.

Short answer: Yes. I wonder how Pinkie will seduce the others.

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It’s a detail I dropped in The Morning After.

S’more of a gland, really

I believe Dash should be coming up soon right? Dash is not into Mares but she will be up against the Pink Minx and she has already said that Dash is her longest lasting crush. So how will she fare with Pinkie actually trying to seduce her? Also consider that Dash is very competitive what if Pinkie convinces her the competition is for the best most romantic night possible or some such? Who knows where it could go.

If what Trixie said was true, Starlight would be the end game.

ACtually I have had a soft spot for Twilight/Pinkie so I am cool with how this turned out. It is funny to see Twilight seemingly leading Pinkie on the date (though it may be just to control the craziness).

Now it is Rainbow Dash's turn. Not sure how Dash is going to take it but Pinkie always seems to be fixated fairly heavily on Dash so this could be fun.

Heh, nice to see Pinkie be the one caught by surprise for just a bit.

Came out sorry, but still took a while. But I'll forgive it because this was good. I liked how Twilight being a scientist would just go with it. It really works with her personality. Interesting that you seem to be seeing up Apple Jack as the pseudo-antagonist, normally that one gets pushed off on Dash. Looking forward to seeing where you go from here now that it doesn't seem like it's just gonna be Pinkie seducing each in turn.

...Yep, they do have a lot to figure out. ...Or alternatively, to try to move past and forget the conversation ever happened.

Well off to a slight detour before Pinkie pounces on Rainbow Dash.

Surprised we didn’t hear about his mother, Old Bag. Or his uncle who works as a Santa Hooves, Gift Bag. Or his cousin who was a part of the flying circus, Rat Bag. And who can forget his other cousin who owns that paper processing plant, Brown Bag. Oops, almost forgot his culinarian aunt, Doggie Bag.

I’m really curious about pony Oedipus, as his human counterparts reaction was to stab his own eyes out.

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Oedipon decided that if banging both parents and his variety of aunts, uncles and cousins, ended with him being a duke, perhaps this whole incest taboo wasn't as bad as all that.

Besides, it made for an interesting dinner table story and quite the saucy play after some cleaning up.


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Oh, we'll brush upon it, but it shant unduly get in the way of PinkieDash time.

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Now now, we'd not have an Oedipon-ing here. Their mother's name is Small Purse, though she changed it to Hoof Bag when she married one very unfortunately named stallion of the Bag clan, who then proceeded to take a long lasting grudge out on all his children.

Old Bag is the matriarch of the clan, and ya those other ponies probably are around.

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I figured she would take the Bag name on marriage. Similar to how Carrot and Cup have the same surname.

Fluttershy is truely history’s greatest monster.

Was the shrink Dr. Wolf??? I feel like you’re alluding to Dr. Wolf.

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Dire wolves are a sapient species in my setting, though I've hardly alluded to them yet, but what kind of wolf would be named "Wolf". That'd be silly.

Don't be silly.

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She might agree, you are your own worst critic, after all.

I have to say I was hoping for some longer scenes of Pinkie trying to woo Rainbow Dash. Dash is her most often crush from what we saw in a previous story and considering their dynamic you can get a lot of fun out of it I am sure.

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That’s fair. Ya know, I’ve one more chapter, a pressing need to please and some ideas brewing in my head.

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And just to let you know I still enjoyed the chapter and it was a fun read.

Well, that got heavy.:twilightoops:

Still, it's not just your mean impulses but what you do (or don't) do with them that count. Not that Fluttershy would accept that so easily.

What are the siblings’ names, exactly?

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The Bag siblings? At least of this branch of the Bag family. The first OC was a cousin, one half of the Paper & Plastic Bag twins. As for these brothers and sister, we have Shit Bag, Sleaze Bag, Dr. Douche Bag M.D. and Scum Bag.

That is hilarious, cute, and my kind of weird. I also love Twiggle Wiggle

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