A strange accident has stranded three mighty warriors in Equestria: Horus Lupercal, Sanguinius, and the Emperor of Mankind. Trapped in the bodies of ponies, and fresh from the battle on the Vengeful Spirit they must navigate this strange new world. But their very arrival has altered the course of Equestrian history: Nightmare Moon has escaped her end, and still haunts Equestria. With Horus at large with her, and the Emperor crippled by his injuries, Sanguinius must work with Twilight Sparkle to find a way to save the world, while maybe learning a few valuable (and grudging) lessons about friendship.
Chapters (2)
The question is; is it Magnus' fault(agian) why they're there in the first place
Think that should be hole...
This has my full attention....
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Thank you, fixed.
That was awesome! Keep this up man and it will reach the stars! (Also i'm italian so if you need help with latin or Italians i am at your service)
A few likely typos.
What could do damage like this do(to) an alicorn?
I came(can?) overmatch her here (is overmatch even a word? it's either overpower/overcome or match imao)
Also, I'm pleasantly surprised to see the story continued. Quite a lot of them die with the first few chapters after all.
I think Equestria is a Kingdom of some sort but i don't know... there are many iterations of Equestria and some are democratic and some are kingdoms and some are something inbetween and others are something else...
So in short, i don't know to be honest
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Eh, thanks anyway.
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Thanks for the help. Should be fixed now.
Glad you're enjoying it!
Hmm.....
A shame this was never continued