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SPark
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To be honest, I didn't enjoy this story as much as I thought I would. The premise behind the story is what drew me in, but the sex scenes didn't have any real flavour to them, thus didn't really get a wiggle out of me, heh. There was quite a few commas that didn't need to be there, but other than that, everything else was spot on.
Well, Spike does live in the same house as Twilight and Starlight, and has been known to sleep in the same room as Twilight in the past, so...
I would very much like to see a sequel, or a follow-up chapter, to this wonderful story.
Well and truly worthy of a Like and Favourite.
really Garble? the dickbag of dragons, usually when i read stories like this its spike that dose the breeding
So... like I said Garble will never be my fav character, but I guess that from what we seen, he could act like this...maybe even thinking to impress a woman/mate by this like-to-be-cool attitude. Who knows, maybe even deny it in front of his peers
I as always appreciate some explanation and fore...word before clop part itself, as it set stage and makes it more interesting to me...and ofcourse moar dragonz ale always good.
I also like this ''guiding of inexperienced lover, as it seems to fit Celestia's personality
And maybe this can have potentional for sequel?
Came for porn, left satisfied with story.
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Garble was pretty clearly in the tags. If you don't like him, nobody held you down and made you read this.
My reaction - "Huh, Celestia and dragon? That could be interesting... Uh, Garble? No thanks".
8518464
not saying your choice was bad im just saying it unusual, and it was an alright story
New fic of yours! Must. Read. When. Have. Time.
Wow this got featured!
I like this story and if it's a one shot it's interesting but I wouldn't mind a story of this little halfbreed
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Yep! It's doing pretty well for a fic that's a little bit of a crackfic.
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I won't tell you it's the most amazing thing I've ever written, because it's not, but I think it's fairly fun.
Well, I wasn't expecting three different dragons.
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I loved the premise too, and the scenes themselves were great in concept. Like, Viridis' incessant coiling around Celestia was a kink I never knew I wanted to see. Now I'm going to be disappointed if I don't find more of it!
But with three different scenes of sex in one chapter, it felt like none got quite the attention each deserved. IE, I wanted to see more!
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The typical Amazon porn piece is 5k words. (And many clopfics are as well, it's a very common length. It's the average length of an Ember's chapter, for that matter.) That's for the intro, the setup, the sex itself, and the conclusion. This is well over 9k words, so I don't think any of the sex scenes were unusually short.
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Yes, but let's say this story was 3k words of scene-building so we'd know what was up, and be immersed in what was happening (and easier math). That means 6k words for the sex itself, but you've got three independent scenes. That's only 2k words per scene, which is fairly short for a complete clop scene in my opinion (and judging by the stories I've saved). Since none of the dragons were there from the beginning, that's 2k words for character introduction, reader investment, sex, and then wind-down, which did not feel like a lot to me.
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Eh. I was stretching them out as long as I felt I should.
Maybe it's just me, but I find long sex scenes tedious.
When you expect a lot of roughness but get sweet sweet loving instead. Good read!
Nice story there. Got nice vibe's from dragon's too; "Average-Joe", "Cherry-boy" and "Gentleman" in order.
Keep it up
I think you should have thrown Spike into the mix somehow maybe have Celeste to give him a large horde so he reached maturity
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They read like the speed I assumed it happened, Midnight was alright, Garble was fast due to inexperience, and the
last guy was the longest cause he was doing interesting stuff first, I see nothing wrong with that.