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Aprion


"Never let your fear of being criticized stop you from expressing yourself through art." ~Fluttershy.

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One day while out crusading for their cutie marks, the CMC find themselves in a heap of trouble. But they come out of it with super powers. There's just a bit of a catch to it. Hold on to your flanks Equestria.

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A new story? You needed a break from heart or just an idea in your head???

8498399
Just an idea that wouldn't let go.

How do I know this story won't die after only one chapter?

A new story!? Is this why Evergreen hasn't gotten an update in ages! Harumph! Harumph! Let's see what this one is all abou- *Reads First Chapter And Eats It Up* SQUEE!!! I love it! Favored! Thank you! Best pre-birthday present ever!

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you just about made my day with this comment. Thank You! :twilightsmile:

Interesting concept based on the picture.

Apple Bloom let out a low whistle. “That’s one fancy looking piece of equipment.”

-I would think that Twilight's collection would have left AB jaded, but maybe she hasn't seen that?

“Cutie mark crusaders junior astronomers, yay!” All three shouted while they smacked their hooves together in a high five motion.

-Consider Ponifying this as just "high one" without the word "motion" and with the "one" replacing "five".

8498785
Well at first I was going to use this as my cover art,
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because I couldnt find a good fusion image based on the CMC. ( there are quite a few pony fusion images, but almost none which involve the CMC )

In the end I decided to just make one myself. So I got to work and this is what we ended up with.

It will be interesting to see when the sisters meet up
With her, and when shes gains the moniker of Migjty Mare.

Well done my friend.

8498812
Read the story, Loved the story, Faved the story...not much more to say. I'll be waiting for the next updates to this and others...though I am saddened that Project Sleipnir has been cancelled, I hold out hope that it will be resumed at a later date, or perhaps re-written if their was something in the current version that refused to move forward.

Best wishes,

Magus Neon

8547878
glad you liked it. the next chapter is bout 50% finished. no ETA on completion though since im juggling evergreen at the same time.

An imaginary moment.

"Luna, I think we've found another ...sister?"
Luna's reply was slow in coming, then with the formality of a bygone age, she managed,
"Indeed, and well met! Pray tell, by what name wouldst thee be called, honored sibling?"
The young flame-colored alicorn bowed respectfully, and replied, "We are Crusader."

Two fillies face-hooved, unseen. The third just shrugged.

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...0-o :twilightblush::rainbowlaugh: Gender bent Crusader!!!!!

Any chance of this continuing? It shows promise.

If highly improbable, you should mark it "Cancelled". You can always change it later.

8963169
I have every intention of continuing this. Chapter two is about halfway done. The problem is I don't have as much time to write as I did previously, and i have two other projects to finish aside from this one, so everything gets delayed and delayed. Much to my own chagrin. :ajsleepy:

8963645
Ah, I see. Yeah, that sort of thing happens.

Great story so far, but how will the CMC be able to separate into themselves again?

9586806
guess i really should finish chapter two.

This was a strong opening chapter. Even with the (awesome) sci-fi elements the story still feels like MLP. I'd love to see this continued; it shows a ton of promise!

9662815
ive been meaning to get back to this one, but life just keeps throwing a wrench into my plans.

9662837
Ah, I know how it is. Will be over here waiting patiently for the next update. :)

You have my attention and I will be waiting patiently

How’s the status on this story? The opening chapter is awesome, and it would be a shame to leave such a good story hanging halfway…

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