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Now this is a bit interesting. More of a teaser than anything. Want to see where it leads.
Post it on some groups that will give it for sure some attention, overall if you gonna go with that kind of thing its will be very good
So far, so good.
Good job on the story, i hope you write more
Hey, that's pretty good.
Tags are good... That cast you have looks nifty...
And it's nicely written... I'm sold. When's episode 2?
~Skeeter The Lurker
Looks good. Looking forward to more.
Hmm...this looks like an interesting change.
Not how I expected it to go, but rather sweet all the same.
Huh. Seems like Cicida has become...smitten.
I'm curious if she'll start slowly changing her Gemini form in order to better please Emerald, although he seems fairly enamored already. At least he's proving to be a much better/healthier meal than the endless junk food she's been getting up on stage, heh. The offer to dance at the palace was out of left field there however, although Luna's presence makes far more sense than having Celestia check out the local talent heating up the rumor mills. I'd be wary of actually taking the offer. Not that it would be everything she imagines it to be with the prestige, gold, and glitter, but also the darker side when dealing with powerful people- er, ponies in high positions. Blackmail, politics, and other unsavory things come to mind as well as being a pawn in their machinations.
Still, if her true changeling identity comes to light, her only protection might very well be running to the Princesses and throwing herself upon their mercies if a mob-driven witch hunt in the city is started. I'm assuming their race is as feared, misunderstood and [possibly] hated as it is in just about every other story.
you know i just thought of something is this after thorax or before and if its after does Gemini know
That last line of Luna's letter.
You can.just hear the record scratching to a stop at the end their.
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something like this maybe...
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EXACTLY THAT!
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I was wondering about that while it was readily apparent it was a very wet dream, why wasn't she in her natural form? We never really see her at all during the scene, various parts given generic names and descriptions, much as how you might never "see" yourself in a dream but know your limbs exist. Good to see Luna doesn't care what our lovely dancer is on the outside but more focused on her insides (especially during this dream, heh heh), I just hope she keeps it a secret. If nothing else, "Gem" has a very powerful friend who could also influence the opinion of other Princesses or at least prevent anything dire happening.
Ow. Ok, I did laugh at that ending. As for a fantasy Menage a trois, I think Luna could pull something off like that in the dreamscape.
(I'll assume that Gem didn't land on her head but swooped to the floor gracefully)
Oooooooooooh I freakin love this story but Boi that cliff hanger got me like
Somebody bout to get themselves a taste of that eyecandy
Hope we get an update soon
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Me too...
Hmm. I like it
Wow that's such an offer. I don't think she would like dancing for the rich snobs of canterlot tho
Oh fuck she knows
More!!!
Centerstage with Michael Kay?
Glas to see this story return
So, Gemini's a lightweight.
XD That was a great way to end the chapter.
glad this updated but you had to skip the clop scene i was looking forward to that grumble grumble
Oof, bit of a wait but it's all good. Still auspicious timing for posting on April 1st.
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No April Fool’s prank here. Just trying to finish off this story for good before Summer.
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Sorry to disappoint. I’m not too great at writing quality sex scenes, so I decided to skip it. We are in need of skilled clop writers for this very purpose.
Good premise, good pacing. Write bigger paragraphs though, the writing quality itself suffers from choppiness but you know... It works.
It's just... A premise like this, a story like this would be fantastic if just written more collectedly.
I have only read the first chapter, might check out the others but sadly it is getting a bit late. Hope you've improved, if not well... I'll probably give it a read anyway but expect the same critique.
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I’ve needed a good editor for quite a long time. If you’re interested, let’s take a crack at fixing this story.
Awesome to see this story back. Missed it. Great update
A bit rushed with the ending but good overall
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Rushed? Eh, not really. Reminds me of just about every drama/romance TV show and movie, wrapping up near the end in a climax.
Who made the cover art, and why does it look like it was made by Kenkou Cross?
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That’s because it was made by KenKou Cross. The patreon link is in the bottom right corner of the image to avoid copyright issues. Full credit to the guy.
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Well that's just my opinion. I honestly dont like many of those hurried last moment romances but I do understand. They are under time restrictions. Not the same as a written story. Again it's just how it feels to me
Onyx, you are just as replaceable. If not more. She brings in the hits. You don't