Ominous way for this chapter to end.

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Will have to read on tomorrow ^_^

Great story so far, flow is a bit fast but it's fine.

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Attention spans are short in a digital world and I'm still learning the balance. But I'll get there! Was a lot to fit into the commissioned word count too, but hey ho, was fun :)

I am satisfied please continue

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The story has been written in full and one chapter per day is being posted.

I like this story.
I also like that it'll be updating daily.
:D A good author you are to your readers :)

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Thanks it's nice to get a comment like this at work! :)

He jumped, hooves skittering from the rug onto stone, skin trembling. He hadn’t known that horses could jump so far, but the foal that had suddenly appeared at his hooves as if she had always been there seemed completely unperturbed by his display. With a pink mane and tail and a body as white as a flurry of snow, she bobbed her muzzle and giggles, eyes wide and gleaming with the innocence of youth.

At first, I thought she was Celestia in disguise.

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Damn, that would have been a nice twist, but it may have been a bit too nice to contrast the flaws presented. I like it though!

QUITE ENTERTAINING !!!

“No, my magic’s not good enough yet. But I will be able to levitate something like that one day! Then I’ll be the one getting the balls out of allllll the trees!”

This seems a bit fast paced due to the time skip edge.