Looks good so far. Cann't wait to see what she goes when she goes to the school house or the orphanage. Maybe a scene with Pip or Scoots.

Keep up the good work!

8477017
As always, that's the plan.

i am so damn excited for the next chapter!! keep up the excellent work :D

8477282
Much appreciated

No... just no....

is there a way you can do this, like, without the vore?

Yes! I was waiting for this to come out. Thanks!

8477825
I accept that this won't ever be popular, but I'm just happy to please the few, eager fans of this sort of thing.

Not really into too much of the stuff here, I'm just here to say my stories also have a rare combination of fetishes that don't appeal to too many people.

8477916
Cool

8477936
It's a tough road we walk, but walk it we must.

This is getting already interesting I can't wait to see what other perversions that Twilight has developed with her friends and the rest of Ponyville in her experimentation with then. It was interesting to see that Mrs.Cake was there and I hope to see him again wonder if their will be more of him later in the story. I also wonder if Twilight might have also seemed some of the mares in Ponyville. Looking forward to the next chapter.

8478089
Happy to hear

I look forward to reading this!

I apparently enjoyed the first one, even though I don't remember reading it. Time to re-read!

It was an interesting chapter, delving in the strange mind of what now definitely is a villain Twilight. Of course, she doesn't realize that. Is she as much of a prey of Dominance as the others, or has naturally come to believe the spell is right?

I won't continue reading this, because the story makes me wat to punch the alicorns in the face repeatedly. But I don't want to insult you or anything, just letting you know.

It's a great story, just not my type.

8478489
As do I

8479144
Cool.

8479493
You think this is bad, just go read Tarnished Silver and its sequels. You'll never look at Rarity the same again.

8479681
I'm not saying it's bad, just that I don't like it.

No thank you; I like the way I see Rarity now.

good story. please continue

8483372
Working on it

8483406
Story good so far, you do well with writing good story, me Crunk!

Do keep up the good work, there is not enough fics with Princesses abusing thier power.

8487424
Thanks.

8487592
Quite true.

Okay, so at least Twilight seems to be trying to be less cruel than her forebears. Doesn't change the fact that she and the others are in desperate need of a visit from the Culexus Temple. I am seriously hoping that there is some kind of comeuppance before this is over.

8498458
Some kind. Yes.

Not sure if you accept suggestions but... Did you think about Twilight or Cadence using Dominance in Flurry after she try to rebel or try to take what is not from her to educate her?

This is mainly a suggestion. If you don't like it, just ignore it.

8510148
The story's already been planned out, so such a course would not be possible. Thanks for the suggestion, anyway.

"He loved being filled and Twilight knew this. She knew it because it made her happy, which meant Mr. Cake... was all too happy to do whatever it took to please her."

This line does a lot for me x3

8517279
Awesome.

8529495
Not in this case. Twilight is an alicorn, which, in her mind, is something completely different from a pony.

What's the schedule for more chapters?

8531755
Whenever I can.

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8551419
Neat.

I don't know how I stumbled on this. Incredibly out of the comfort zone, and yet... curious to see where the story leads.

8627278
Always nice to hear. Thanks.

8477703
The vore is an integral part of this story, and really shows off to the reader that the princesses view ponies as nothing more than objects.

8660894
Nail on head. Thanks.

8660894
you can do that with just rape and sex you know. you don't have to eat them.

8662603
theres also the aspect that weilding domenence causes imence strain on the princesses even with twilights improvements
they need that inherent magical energy and they have to get it somewhere, and its either that, which the ponies admitedly by mind alteration enjoy, or *Points at tirek* and heres the thing, since that spell he uses drains all the magic out of a pony, the second it finished the pony would snap out of dominences effect, fully...
so tell me, if you had the option of dieing happy and blissfully with no cares in the world
or living in horror and fear the rest of your natural life, drained of half of what made you who you were i might add, and likely locked away in a mentel asylum to keep you from hurting yourself or others....which one would you pick?

9142746
It's a pretty horrible deal either way. Philosophically, one might argue being drained is preferable because it affords a bit of freedom, if only in the mind.

I find myself hoping Chryssy is immune and will kill the Alicorns, ending the Empire.

9383082
That does seem like the most optimistic outcome.

God it's horrible, but I thought Twilight, while the mare was distracted with her husband, was going to eat the pregnant mare's foal.