I'm on the verge of tears!The feeling mounting in her was too close to the real deal, and finally she moaned, “Please! Just take me!” DAT SENTENCE lawl this is SOOOO funny!
928860 I go by Dan Savage. According to him, coming is the verb, cum is the product (in guys) of said verb. If you can't trust Dan Savage on writing about sex, who can you trust?
928952 I do plan to do more! At least, when the prompts on Sexty Minute Pony Stories are something I can work with. Most of what I write will involve some combination of Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Twilight, or ScootaDash.
I'm glad you liked it, and I hope you'll read more when it gets posted.
929338 It's a tumbler, here. Every Wednesday and Sunday they put up a prompt, and writers try to use it to write a sexy story in sixty minutes. (They give us a day to find the time, the sixty minutes is on the honor system.)
So this prompt was "Rainbow Dash learns a lesson." A new prompt comes up two hours or so from now.
929550 Sorry, I only had sixty minutes to write it! However ScootaDash is in my top pairings, so I'll probably do more when another prompt comes up that it applies to.
933305 your human ages They killed my scientific mind 7 is the equine age if adulthood, not 18, that's older, although a horse can live for forty years or more.
933349 I'm sorry! I usually try to avoid ages for that reason, but here I had to be explicit because the prompt tumbler is really really big on no foalcon, so I wanted to be 100% clear for them that Scoot was legal here. (I also don't entirely trust some of the less bright bronies to figure out horse ages. I guess that makes me look like a less bright pegasister, but as a writer I try to be clear to everyone.)
942899 I really really hope that was intentional I wish I could thumb comments hnggg
Okay on a different note THIS STORY The only fault I can find with it is that it had to end. I didn't even think about wings being that sensitive, so I stopped for a minute while reading and went "oh. Yes. I can most definitely ship this." Please keep writing stories. This pleases me.
1812428 Unlikely. Think about it, rubbing your own back when you're sore doesn't feel awesome, it's just necessary. Getting a massage on the other hand can be a huge turn on.
FIRST!!!
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(Might want to edit that, if the mods catch you you get a 24 hour ban. )
Straight to the point I see
Very sexy, incredibly well done, especially considering you did this in under an hour.
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yea I was just kidding cus I never dun it b4 lawl reading now looks good...if you know what I mean... btw DAT NAME
I'm on the verge of tears!The feeling mounting in her was too close to the real deal, and finally she moaned, “Please! Just take me!”
DAT SENTENCE lawl this is SOOOO funny!
928796
AND BANNED! did you miss the notice about that?
928814
Thanks! Yeah, that time limit is crazy, but I managed it this time at least.
928812
Since when does Dash ever want things to go slower? It'll take some getting used to for her.
928812
My thoughts EXACTLY
Misspelled "cumming"
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I go by Dan Savage. According to him, coming is the verb, cum is the product (in guys) of said verb. If you can't trust Dan Savage on writing about sex, who can you trust?
928872
OH ok but who's this dan? Ill look im up
Hmm, and you plan to do another one of these soon?
I really liked this one, and I enjoyed the preening part. I haven't read any clops with preening, so this was refreshing!
I'm going to be following this...
~Syn3rgy
928952
I do plan to do more! At least, when the prompts on Sexty Minute Pony Stories are something I can work with. Most of what I write will involve some combination of Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Twilight, or ScootaDash.
I'm glad you liked it, and I hope you'll read more when it gets posted.
929232 so what are these Sexty Minute Pony prompts anyways? Where do they come from?
I've been seeing a few different writers do these.
~Syn3rgy
929338
It's a tumbler, here. Every Wednesday and Sunday they put up a prompt, and writers try to use it to write a sexy story in sixty minutes. (They give us a day to find the time, the sixty minutes is on the honor system.)
So this prompt was "Rainbow Dash learns a lesson." A new prompt comes up two hours or so from now.
929369 Hmmm, very interesting!
Thank you!
~Syn3rgy
Wait what!?!? It ENDED?!?! NOOOOOOOOOOO
Anyway nice story!
929550
Sorry, I only had sixty minutes to write it! However ScootaDash is in my top pairings, so I'll probably do more when another prompt comes up that it applies to.
Glad you liked what was there!
"The hot eighteen year old mare"
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Um, that doesn't explain much. Did I get my age-of-consent all over your foalcon, or my human ages all over your horse biology?
933305 your human ages
They killed my scientific mind
7 is the equine age if adulthood, not 18, that's older, although a horse can live for forty years or more.
933349
I'm sorry! I usually try to avoid ages for that reason, but here I had to be explicit because the prompt tumbler is really really big on no foalcon, so I wanted to be 100% clear for them that Scoot was legal here. (I also don't entirely trust some of the less bright bronies to figure out horse ages. I guess that makes me look like a less bright pegasister, but as a writer I try to be clear to everyone.)
933349 I think that guy just wanted some kiddie porn or some shit like that... I prefer an adult Scootaloo myself
Please continue!
Fantastic job on this. Keep it up!
928803 really?
942899
I really really hope that was intentional
I wish I could thumb comments hnggg
Okay on a different note THIS STORY
The only fault I can find with it is that it had to end.
I didn't even think about wings being that sensitive, so I stopped for a minute while reading and went "oh. Yes. I can most definitely ship this."
Please keep writing stories. This pleases me.
947216 I think you replied to the wrong comment?
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I was replying to the ">>O really?"
It made me chortle
so, is a pegasus masturbating when it's cleaning it's feathers?
1812428 Unlikely. Think about it, rubbing your own back when you're sore doesn't feel awesome, it's just necessary. Getting a massage on the other hand can be a huge turn on.
Scootadash is my otp