Look at what you did, sis. Such terrible things. And sometimes, I even helped. I hated every second of it, but I crossed line after line, all because I love you. And fear you. But I never thought you would ask me to do something like this.
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Well, Rarity certainly works fast, she already has her hooks deep into Twist
You are building up to something quite well
I'm ashamed to say it but NEW CHAPTER!!!!!
NEXT CHAPTER!
i fell horrid for lovin every moment of this
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You shouldn't. The draw of a well-written character-based story, regardless of content, tends to be natural. This particular piece, while telling and endorsing perversity and deviant behaviors, is still exceedingly well-done in terms of psychology and character interactions.
The gritty feel that the story has only adds to that allure.
Not to mention the definitively forbidden nature of the piece; it has a draw from that all on its own, you know?
It really is quite despicable.
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So basically you say that this is written as a incentive to the perverseness of breaking taboo, right?
I'm going to take a stab at what's going to happen next. Spike's going to find out about the forged letter and try to ask Sweetie Belle what happened. She'll be uncooperative in answering his questions for obvious reasons. Which will cause him to become suspicious of what happened at Rarity's. He'll decide to stake out Carousel Boutique on his own and find Peppermint Twist on her way to the "fashion show". He'll tell her about the note and Twist will ask Rarity what's going on. Rarity will do her thing, namely lie and manipulate her way into convincing Twist that Spike is lying. With no actual proof of any wrongdoing, Twist will immediately take Rarity's side and Spike will continue to argue that something seems off. Twist will then say something hurtful. Unable to convince Twist to leave with him and emotionally hurt, Spike will give up leaving Twist to her fate. Rarity may also try to draw Spike in but I'm not so sure about that part.
That's as far as my guesswork goes.
Anyway, I love this story. Keep up the good work.
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No. You missed the point entirely.
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no i understand it perfectly, i just love to sound like a smart dumbass
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*applauds* In which case, you succeeded admirably.
YAY!
Wait, Pinkie Pie does NOT ramble aimlessly! Yes she talks fast, but her brain makes connections to two things and her train of thought switches rails so to speak to coincide with said connections and she just speaks whatever comes into her mind. If you take all the words in Pinkie's 'rantings' and read them slowly, you can see where the connections are. She just SEEMS to ramble aimlessly because our brains can't process information at the same speed and with as much accuracy. Pinkie is random, yes but she is completely sane, and I'd actually go as far as to call her incredibly smart and quick-witted. She's just very excitable, but that just makes her cute.
Loving this story so far.
I'm looking forward to getting abused.
>Or did you choose the ugly one on purpose?
>It was as if she had stepped out of her drab
>pledge her life to fulfilling her whims
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>based o the theme
Did you mean "on"?
This is like watching a group of babies tumble down the stairs one after another.
Sure, you're not supposed to laugh. Maybe from a certain perspective you should even feel sorry for the babies, or angry at whoever didn't childproof the stairs.
But ... still ....
They're just so fucking stupid.
How can one help but laugh? And Rarity is so deliciously full of herself, it is a shame she doesn't have a mustache to twirl.
Sunny Daze not Sunny Days
1090760 Pretty sure that was Twilight.
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That is all. Equestria is ours.