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I'm actually hoping that Twilight will be the futa and turn things around on Chrysalis by impregnating her

This fic was supposed to be a quick one-shot to distract me from another longer story, but... well as you can see I lost control and the story just grew out of control. I have two more chapters already almost done, expect the clop parts to be ready in the next few days!

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I'm not saying nothing, but, I think you'll be pleasantly surprised.

YES! more ArmadilloEater! I shall be saving this for tonight for sure!

I'm a sucker for these two. There's just something about their dynamic that I like very much. I can't wait to read more. :twilightsmile:

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Hope you enjoy! If I don't fall asleep I might finish the super duper clop chapter before you start reading, though I'm starting to see double so probably not!

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I've wanted to do a Chrysalis x Twilight fic for a while, I also love those two together!

Heh, all the stories involving a political marriage between Twilight and Prince Blueblood just got some serious competition.

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Gosh dang it. I thought I was going to pass this story up just in case, but now I'll have to give it a try.

Wow this sounds good. I just got done rereading Changeling Courtship Rituals, and I was hoping to find something similar soon.
This'll do very nicely.

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Is there some sort of competition going on for that, or is it just the popular idea for now?

Saw the new MLP episode 'A health of Information'.

Continue this story its really good, Great Job!!

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No worries, more is coming! Next chapter is essentially done, and already have the basic structure for the rest. Unless the story gets away from me again, that is.

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:trollestia:

The changeling queen grumbled, holding her closer. “Don’t tank me,

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Chrysalis is the queen of clopfics, I'm but a humble vector for her greatness.

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her smiley tongue

Goddamn that pic just killed me... Thanks mate, that was a silly mistake; fixed.

Ooo. This chapter was really fun actually

“WAAAAAAAAAGLURKGLARKARHAGLH!”

This is gonna be good :rainbowlaugh:

Fuuuuuuuck....

Don't know if I want Twilight to be corrupted or Chrysalis to be reformed.

Geez, Chrysalis went about her original invasion all wrong. All she needed to do was threaten to lick ponies with that tongue of hers... :rainbowlaugh:

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You have some stories that do a good job at salvaging Blueblood as a character, though I've seen too many that just go with the "Blue is just a misunderstood hero and Rarity deserved it". Good Blueblood redemption story exist though, like The Best Night Ever.

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Well, on one hand I like fluffy endings and am a sucker for cutsey romance, on the other I clapped when this happened: derpicdn.net/img/view/2016/10/23/1279682.gif
Make of this what you will!

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Eh, the clop chapter was like 10k words, I had to spit it up, it's not like creating a cliffhanger mid-sex scene is something I would ever do on purpose, that would be just cruel. :twilightsmile:
Also expect next chapter by Monday.

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Yeah, ponies would have just kneeled to avoid getting slimed... or you know, bent over eagerly, one of the two.

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Oh, cheers! Thanks to the readers for pushing it up there!

Comment posted by PVCmech deleted Sep 24th, 2017

she couldn’t almost

could

“Sparkle, stop tasting so smug or I will bite you for real, I’m warning you.”

Twilight, careful xD

I. Have no idea how you are going to do it. But I'll put my trust in you. For now, the thumb up is in order.

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I'll do my best not to disappoint! And thank you for the help in pointing out mistakes I missed, cheers!

That was terrible. No beginning at the beginning, no elaboration into the development of said plan being put into action, everything was stripped to bare minimum mentions during the wedding, where the story started off and already we're going into the R rated stuff, with tentacle tongue throat expanding.

That's a solid 10/10. This is probably what I needed to read right about now.

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Happy to serve! Working on next chapter now, should be up soon.

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Hue, glad you're in the mood for some mindless clop Toxi, have a seat on Chrysalis' lap and enjoy your stay!

Is it strange that the parts where she teases Twilight (especially when she transformed) turned me on, but the one with actual sex, or the beginnings anyway, hasn't?:rainbowhuh:

>twilight is the most magical horse in the kingdom

>acting like she cant beat chrysalis

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Depends on what you prefer when it comes to clop really: the sensual psychological teasing, or the balls to the walls dirty smut. Next chapter should have some of both, hopefully it will hit your fancy.

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Chrysalis also beat Celestia (Twilight's mentor) in a magical duel, almost conquered Canterlot, and managed to capture pretty much all the important ponies on her second attempt. Funnily enough she was beaten at the last second by the power of love both times, but I digress. Point is: we don't know how strong Chrysalis really is, we don't know how strong Twilight is in comparison, so really it's up to headcanons at this point.

Can't wait for the moment when Twilight is going to actually like that tongue. :trollestia:
I am talking about deep french-kissing in public, of course. The reactions would be priceless.

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gladly.

I should also mention, I'm a big fan of that tongue deep throat action, is gud. It's probably the closest I'll get to ever liking anything resembling tentacle porn.

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I know, it was just a bit of a surprise... not an unpleasant one though:raritywink:

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Heh, no competition. The folks who write them just seem to enjoy seeing who can out snark the other, which always leads to a lot of hilarious dialogue.

Nice! I love the build up and interaction with Chrysalis and Twilight. It's like that Courtship Ritual story, well the marriage thing anyway.

Is Chrysalis going to try and seduce the rest of the Mane 6? It seems like the thing she would do seeming as she wants to built up her hive again. And I'm pretty sure she is also thinking she wants to get to Celestia, I got the vibe 1st chapter that Celestia broken mood was because she had feelings for Twilight.

:rainbowlaugh:

Ok, Chrysalis, that was a good one.

I came for the clop, but I'm immersed in the story. Damn, this is fun! Thanks Armadillo!

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