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Galaxia
Been a fan of MLP since 2015 and started writing fanfiction not long after
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Not sure where this is all going. But, I'll find out in the next few chapters.
Yeah AJ, this is why you talk before you start playing. Consent is sexy and aftercare is crucial. Rarity’ll be lucky to get out of this without a nice big helping of PTSD.
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A few more chapters and you'll see whether or not she copes with what's happened.
Alright, AJ. Seriously, you need to never try to top again until you understand exactly how and why what you did was a disastrous fuck up from beginning to end. Like for instance, when your sub expresses concerns outside of play, the appropriate response is to have a serious conversation about boundaries and safety, not to tell them ‘Shut up slut, you loved it.’ And the best actions after a first intense play session is not generally to slap them on the ass, tell them to clean themselves up, and kick them out the door to go home alone wallowing in a pit of shame and confused arrousal. Your tough, butch, farmer chick image can survive a few minutes of tender aftercare while she comes back to earth.
You don’t need to be in love with a play partner, but they are putting an unprecedented amount of power over their bodies, minds, and emotions in your hands and you need to treat that gift with the respect it deserves. Talk openly beforehand about what you both want to get out of play, and where both of your hard and soft boundaries are. Safe, Sane, and Consensual are your watchwords. A sub who feels safe and cared for in your hands is going to have a much more fulfilling experience, and a dom who makes them feel safe and cared for doesn’t have to worry whether they emotionally damaged their friend irreparably or whether they’ll get arrested for sexual assault. So, win-win.
Not sure if I recall seeing that as a recommended treatment regime in the DSM, but it certainly made for a fun chapter. For someone unsure about her sexuality, Rarity sure does seem to enjoy banging chicks a lot.
She’s old enough to ask the question, she’s old enough to know. And if you don’t answer her, she’s just going to do what she did last time and ask the Internet and learn gods know what.
Nothing much to say but ‘D’aaawww’.
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Well, a unicorn who's read some psychology books isn't really the best to go about curing trauma. But as you say, it was a nice idea for a chapter.
What’s the cover art?
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Cover art can be found here. She does some very good stuff.
https://www.deviantart.com/srtagiuu/art/Equestria-Girls-Rainbow-Rocks-583547973
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Thanks!
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Yeah, I always figured Trixie would be a gamer so she took after me on that front. You've got to slip these things in where you can.
Quiet < = silent, still, not loud.
Quite < = what you actually meant just about every single time you wrote Quiet.
Also, a few cases of you're/your in there to clean up.
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I hope you liked it even with the errors. If they're your only negative points, then I've done a lot better than I thought I ever could (if there is worse you can say, please don't, let me have this moment). I've been back through it all to, hopefully, pick up those points.
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It is what stood out most annoyingly to me.
And i am german, even if there were something perfect, i could find something bad or worse to say about it.
But no, i will let you have this. It is still, after all, a pretty long story to have written.
At least she was inspired by Leonard of Quirm rather than Bergholt ‘Bloody Stupid’ Stuttley Johnson.
Oh, no. Boxing gloves aren’t for the safety of the person getting punched. It’s the exact opposite. Just think, when you punch someone in the head, what’s the limiting factor? The inch-thick skull or the delicate bones of the hand and wrist? No, gloves are used to protect the hands and make the fight more brutal. Back in the bare-knuckles day’s, you got way more split knuckles and broken fingers and next to no deaths.
Because if they were cheap, you’d have to eat next to all of those poor people, darling.
Trixie’s version of asking a girl up to see her etchings.
Gods these two are cute.
Just thought I should put out there that rigging someone as you describe would almost certainly result in injury, possibly cause permanent nerve damage, and might give your sub a new nickname — ‘Stumpy’. You’d be much safer using purpose made equipment for suspension if you’re starting out. Rope bondage is actually pretty dangerous if you aren’t trained to do it right.
WOW, that's not something I thought Applejack would ever say.
Great story. An additional epilogue or sequel with Equestria Rarity and Sunset would be cool.
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. I actually have a sequel chapter half written following Rarity, Sunset and Sunrise. Really should finish it at some point.
I know that the author isn't here anymore, but I chose this ending as canon because of the actual happy ending. Also selfcest.