• Member Since 12th May, 2012
  • offline last seen Feb 17th, 2022

Naryyn


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A nameless pony wakes up shackled to the walls of a dark cell. Without any memories of her previous life, she must face this darkness completely alone.

A warning there are deaths in this story.

Overhaul is partially complete I will finish the rest of it later.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

Generally well written. Did not like the huge time gaps. And the ending comes on too quickly to feel any emotional attachment to the characters. Interesting premise though.

Mindblowing idea. Can't say I expected any of it. The length's fine, I enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

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