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Polaris Solarmoon


An author who's stories may not be good but at least he tries...

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Fluttershy is by far the kindest mare in Equestra, she may not be the the bravest of the Mane Six,but she's pulled though when times got tough....,that is until Discord decided to have some fun, so he placed a spell on Fluttershy which will turn her into a much more rude,cocky and violent version of herself each time she sneezes,yeah like that's not gonna backfire at all....

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Comments ( 16 )

I got the reference. launch from dragon ball?

Well, while the writing itself could use a little improvement, this was a great read!

This ain't half bad
But still could use a lot of improvements

Thank you all, I may not have the best writing ever but I try my best each time.

Ps:You should see my first story....

Pss:Oh and by the way my next story will be better than this, It is called A Small Pink Problem and may take a while to actually make but I'll to get it done as soon as I can.

So Genocider Syo?

i like this,i hope you do a squeal to this story,i hope to read more about winds later on

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I was gonna say that.

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She's a character in the visual novel Danganronpa.
The character Toko Fukawa changes to and from her alternate serial killer personality Genocider Syo/Genocide Jack whenever she sneezes.

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I've never seen it...

Ps: this was more in reference to Launch from Dragon Ball Z, she ends up becoming a rude and violent version of herself when she sneezes.


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I don't know 'bout that this was originally written as stand alone story but I'll see what I can do.

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well think about it,all the times that winds would show up in different mlp events in the show or comic,stuff like that

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As I said before I'll see what could do, oh btw this story now has the most likes out of all of my stories so far and I'd like to thank you all for that. :twilightsmile:

To those who said that my writing needed a little improvement:

I fixed what errors that I could, now this story should really shine. :yay:

I put about three different references in this story,Dragon Ball, Krastos' Krew and Super Smash Bros.

Fluttershy suddenly grabs Discord's tail and then uses it to tickle her snout.

"Fluttershy,what are you doing?" Discord said.

He didn't get an answer, all he got was a soft,dainty sneeze.

"Uh-oh...." were the last words he said before he was suddenly yanked by his tail and then slammed to the ground.

LOL! Karma hit Discord hard.

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Yup , this whole thing was his fault so he winds up paying the piper.

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