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Not bad, but the story so far is a bit cliche. Of course, we're not here for the story, are we? I'll wait to see the next chapter before deciding if I like this.
Im legit surprised that it took this long for someone to make a fic like this after that little car wash scene in the special.
Needless to say im very excited to see how this playes out. Would be nice if the sex scenes were a bit longer and had more positions.
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It would've been sooner, but life happened(and alot more, But for that you'll need to read my blog)
As for your second part:
I myself don't really like long chapters, after a while I forget where I started.
besides, there are six more Girls to go through, could you imagine if every girl got a chapter of about 6k in length?
I'm sure it can't be that b-
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So who is next and how did they not get caught by Pinkie's parents or sisters?
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You'll have to wait and find out
It's not whise to question the Ponk.
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Mwoehahaha!
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Right, forgot who I was walking about, it's Pinkie being Pinkie, but still it would have been HOT to see Cloudy finding out about what her daughter did in her bedroom with a boy she brought over.
so let me guess it ends with them all pregnant...
Wise words, my friend. And I'm happy you found love.
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Thank you.
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Your welcome.
I was really looking forward to Sunsets chapter, though im a bit torn on how it turned out. The biggest problem i have is the 2nd act regarding the portal and what happens there but other than that the rest of it is fine, and compaired to the previous chapters this one has the most "action" between the characters. Even though i dont like the middle part id say this is the best chapter so far imo.
This was hot as hell!
After all the girls pleasure him one by one, will there be a chapter of all 7 girls having sex with him together?
Rainbow Dash of course, unless you add in any other girls, wouldn't mind seeing Principal Celestia and Vice-Principal Luna joining the girls in this too, it would make for a few more Hot and Sexy chapters.
Why not all seven girls together?
Damn so he's done the whole Mane 7 from Equestria Girls, I still think he should get it on with the Principals too.
A time jump and six of the 7 coming to him with positive pregnancy tests? Seeing as he creampied all but Pinkie Pie.
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If I did that, it would be one big ass chapter.
Even without context, each girl needs time on his you-know-what and each would get atleast a 2k word timeframe, which means it would be well over 14k and that's a lot for one chapter.
Really wish I can see that sequel. I'm especially a fan of Indigo
My favorite chapter was the Twilight chapter. It was sweet.
For me its Sunset's 1st with AJ as a close 2nd and Fluttershy taking the 3rd place. And the potential sequel setup at the end there...oh boy. Although regarding the friends the girls brought i think Trixie would've been a better choice for Sunset seeing how they formed a bond in Forgotten Friendship. As for Rainbow the best option i can think of is maybe Vapor Trail, Spitfire or Lightning Dust rather than Indigo as they were never really shown to have any connection to eachother.
Heck now that Indigo was thrown in there i would like to see a similar treatment for the Crystal Prep girls, but thats just me.
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This idea was pre "Forgotten Friendschip" so Trixie wasn't a friend (yet).
As for the Wonderbolds, They aren't yet canon in EqG, so that left them out.
The only thing that annoys me is the fact that you keep putting did in front of names like did sunset shimmer, did pinkie pie
My apologies with the words...but it seems every bad drawer have exceptional talent of writing...and you prove it!
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Uhm, thanks.. I guess?
When can you make you make a sequel Crystal perks
But, aren't you an adult?