Eddie Brock and a symbiote bond to make a creature called Venom, one of Spider-Man's greatest enemies/ reluctant allies. Despite their immense irritation, anger, and sometimes downright hatred toward him, both Eddie and the symbiote greatly value innocents. They will go to great lengths to save them, and stop others who wish to do harm upon them. This made Venom one of the greatest anti-heroes, and by some degree, could be trusted.
But when a "mishap" happens during one of their battles, Venom gets whisked to Equestria.
Now, Eddie and the symbiote must find a way back, if it is even possible. But how will the ponies react to Venom? Will Venom still defend the innocent here, despite being ponies who sometimes despise him? Perhaps Equestria could use a lethal protector...?
Update: April 23, 2020. Story will not continue in this fic. for more details, click on the latest "chapter", an update of the current situation.
Crossover of Venom
For those who don't know much about Venom or Spider-Man, you might be thinking I'm using a villainous Venom. I'm actually using modern Venom, who is an anti-hero. Reading the comics isn't required, but I will hint and/or reference them once in a while.
Also, I will go back at some point to edit the first couple of chapters. They don't include my best writing.
Does that mean you'll reference the infamous story line "One More Day"?
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Most references will be made from previous Venom comics, (Maybe even recent ones as well) and stories where Eddie Brock had a big role or impact, like when he became Anti-Venom. Though I don't plan to, I might reference "One More Day".
Hey! One of my suits has his own story! Sorry if you have a crazy moment in the future.
You use caught my interest, please continue
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I plan to keep going!
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Will other Symbiotes show up?
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You will have to wait and see.
Great crossover, you've got my support
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Thanks, I really appreciate it!
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Hey could you read my story?
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Sure, I'll check it out soon.
I wonder if there will be a spider-mane.... considering he's heading to Manehattan after all!
That was awesome!
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Thanks!
Dude please do more chapters when you have the time, Venom is one of my favorite characters. Both as villian and anti-hero.
Sorry if this sounds like nit picking, but I'm genuinely confused. Wouldn't Flash Thomson be the modern Venom
? As I recall, comic cannon has him serving the military and using the symbiote as part of a military program. Edie, on the other hand, lost the original symbiote and found something else, can't remember what at the moment, that gave him similar abilities leading him to take the name Antivenom before he lost those powers and became normal as a result from aiding Mr. Fantastic in curing a pandemic.
Of course, this could all be in the same universe set by that new scumbag running Marvel publications that came up with the oh-so-brilliant 'plot twist' of making Captain America secretly a Hydra agent the whole time
. In which case, screw soldier Flash-Venom. No matter how cool Flash seemed in what I have seen so far, nothing is worth that racist, stupid, piece of crap change in cannon
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Flash Thompson has been the host for the Venom symbiote for a while now, that is true. But recently, in Venom #150, Eddie and the symbiote were reunited (technically it was the issue prior to that, but that was the last page). I won't tell how Flash lost the symbiote in case you decide to read it yourself, but for a couple months now since summer it has been classic Eddie Venom. I hope that clears the confusion you may have had on modern day Venom.
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Trust me, I will see to it that this story gets chapters sooner than later, without rushing it of course. You can trust that I will take good care of this story, because Venom is one of my favorite characters as well, specifically with Eddie Brock.
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. Thanks for addressing that
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I admit, I've certainly been out of touch with the comics for that long at least so that would explain the inconsistency
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welcome
Good first chapter. Jokes were good, the action was well-described, and you set the scenes quite well.
However, I do have a few gripes with descriptions and dialogue here. There are also a few grammar mistakes in this chapter.
Take for example, "Yeah, yeah, just... never mind, I just felt a bit off. Let's get back to enjoying our meal."
Ponder for just a second, would Twilight really need to say "Let's get back to enjoying our meal?" People don't usually say that. By the way that humans (and ponies alike) use their minds, they would just go back to eating without having to say anything about it.
It's lines like those that may slightly break immersion in the story because they don't sound... "real," I suppose.
Another thing. There's something else that you need to watch out for in stories.
"They were currently by the lake, and just having a nice time."
It's the rule of Show, Don't Tell. "and just having a nice time," is a 'Tell.' You should show that they're having a good time, either through implying the fact through, for example, an arm wrestle, or by describing actions instead of generalizing a theme. The story is far more cohesive when there is mainly showing.
And also, you described all the Ponies and Spike and their features... why would you need to do that in this story? Nobody who reads this story won't know who these ponies are.
And lastly, re-read the chapter or get somebody to edit. There are a few tense and grammar mistakes.
Overall, strong start. Just needs refinement.
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Thank you for the constructive critisicm. I will keep this all in mind.
It was good, though I expected some more humiliation of RD. Ah well, it was good enough. Btw I can't wait to see the princesses reaction to venoms power. Is he going to be stronger than them?
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Nice buddy. I can't wait to see the next chapter and the long road ahead for our anti-hero to get back home. Brock is a classic, but i like Flash Thompson for what he's achieved as Agent Venom. But nothing like little old Eddie to go feel like in the old days.
Not bad, not bad at all.
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Lol, sorry RD wasn't as humiliated as much as you liked, but like the symbiote said, can't humiliate her too much. As for the princesses, we're getting there.
Once again, the thick headed Rainbow Dash attacks some stranger, without checking to see if they deserve it or not, or knowing how strong the person is, just rush in head 1st with no plan
. I swear she has to be the most paranoid pony in the country. I hope to see more of Venom damaging RD's pride and ego(and any other arrogant pony for that matter)
, and overall this story's pretty good. Especially seance it's as REAL crossover, and not another displaced story, that's become the cancer of this site
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Thanks, I'm glad you're liking the story so far! I must agree with you on the Displaced stories. While I thinks some of them are actually pretty good, most are fast-paced, bad grammar, off-characters, and more mistakes. It really makes me wonder why most don't just do a crossover with the actual character instead of having some random guy become said character.
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YES, EXACTLY! In fact I don't think displaced should count as crossovers. When I read a crossover fic, I want to read about the actual character from that franchise, NOT some random guy/girl who turns into said character, because they happen to be dressed as them. If anything displaced should just be categorized as a "human in equestria" story and NOT a crossover. Another reason why I refuse to read displaced, is because when someone turns into the character they're dressed as, they're forced to abandon their personality, morals, humanity, and everything that make them who they are, to be that character(especially if they dressed as a villain). And if they become a villain, the ponies always shun, hate, fear, or turn against them simply because they're a "villain" now. And considering that 80% of every new crossover story is a displaced one(especially with characters I like and want a story made about), you can imagine how my hatred for displaced just keeps getting bigger and bigger.
Sorry for the rant, I just REALLY needed to get that off my chest.
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I completely understand. Lets hope that more legitimate crossovers with the actual characters become popular again, its always fun to read those kinds of stories , for me at least.
$10 says Venom decks like 20 or more guards.(Seriously, worst. military. EVER!)
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$50 says he beats all of the princesses if they ever get in a fight
awesome!
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Lol, guys making bets already.
$250 says Rainbow Dash will try beating Venom when she has the chance.
$200 on Rainbow getting her flank handed to her by Venom again.
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I bet $200 that at some point Shining sends the entire royal army on him, and get stomped in 5 minutes, and double if 20% or more guards run away screaming.
And for a side bet, $50 says that despite Venom's nightmare appearance, the CMC will idolize him as their new hero.
You have no idea, Eddie. I'm sure Pinkie's sense is kicking in, telling her to prepare a party.
A wise advice for you and the symbiote, Eddie. Run....run like hell.
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I'll take that bet.
Amazing story. But it would be nice to know the schedule of this story
Btw FIRST
Something's not quite right here.
If Celestia's guards still try to capture him after witnessing him take down that hydra, and every other beast with ease, then they're as stupid as they are useless.
Awesome!
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Fixed, thanks for pointing that out. I meant to put something else, but I guess I spelled it wrong and auto correct put in contempt.
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I don't really have a set schedule as of now. I'll try to get at least one chapter placed every week, and with the time I have right now I could get a couple more every week as well.
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Thanks!
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welcome when will you make more.