As Dooby stated, get a proof reader yes. I'd also recommend using an editing program like word or google docs cause you're also making mistakes that a simple spellcheck would solve.
I like this story so far but I noticed you used similar sounding words in the wrong places. Is English your first langue? I could help proofread chapters and polish spelling and grammar.
As Dooby stated, get a proof reader yes. I'd also recommend using an editing program like word or google docs cause you're also making mistakes that a simple spellcheck would solve.
I like this story so far but I noticed you used similar sounding words in the wrong places. Is English your first langue? I could help proofread chapters and polish spelling and grammar.
Cant wait for more :)