Fallout Equestria: Commonwealth - Ranger's Way

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Shanaar

Shanaar #1 · Sep 5th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Interesting so far, I have a feeling that we will see more of the wolf pack in the future. Also wondering how you will interact with the stuff that will happen in The Commonwealth stories.

Rhettbutler

Rhettbutler #2 · Nov 1st, 2019 · · · Prolog ·

I stood on a stage; side by side with my fellow ranger recruits in an ornate dress uniform. The uniform consisted of a green jacket with a variety of pins and medals. The ranger’s patch, a bear reared up on its hind legs with a star in front of its belly, was sown on the right sleeve. There had been fifteen of us when training started but now there were only three. I didn’t know exactly how long it had been; the days and nights seemed to blend together after the first five days. But here I was, standing next to my fellow graduates as Chief Hooflon spoke into a microphone, giving a speech that I didn’t pay much attention to. A ranger didn’t need fancy words. We were described as “quieter than a shadow and more ferocious than a hellhound.” An accurate description.

Reminded me of this song, not sure that was the intention.

Intriguing
If you get the chance I'd recommend going through and read it again. A few mistakes and sentences that may be a bit incomplete.

Rhettbutler

Rhettbutler #3 · Nov 3rd, 2019 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Another neat chapter. Color me intrigued.

Rhettbutler

Rhettbutler #4 · Nov 15th, 2019 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Definitely enjoying this.

Rhettbutler

Rhettbutler #5 · Nov 15th, 2019 · · · Chater 3 ·

Rough start to the mission. I would suggest going back through and reading through.
The story is great but may seem a bit rushed.

Rhettbutler

Rhettbutler #6 · Nov 16th, 2019 · · · Chapter 4 ·

His corpse continued into the house and took my rifle with it, but I had my Sequoia. I lined the sights up with the pyro unicorn's head and fired. The sack he wore over his face did nothing to stop the .45-70 round as it traveled through his head and exploded out the back in a glorious display of blood and skull fragments.

What a great gun. I love the mod for the game that adds it to Fallout 4. Neat way to introduce The Abernathys.

Rhettbutler

Rhettbutler #7 · Nov 16th, 2019 · · · Chapter 5 ·

"Cuddles! What happened to you?! Did Ack-ack put those on you? Oh, I am going to skin her alive. And your legs! Who did this to your legs?!" Oh, this was her pet. I shot her pet.

This got a chuckle out of me.

Rhettbutler

Rhettbutler #8 · Nov 17th, 2019 · · · Chapter 5 ·

I do hope you continue this story. It's quite an intriguing concept.

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