Trixie has a knack for getting in over her head. It comes as no surprise then that she sells her loyalty to the first being to offer her power. Unfortunately, that being is Grogar, the Dark Lord of Tambelon, who has returned from his banishment to overthrow the Princesses and cast Equestria back into the Dark Ages. What at first seemed like a simple opportunity has now turned into the biggest mistake of Trixie's life. Now she is bound by her own words to serve a tyrannical master in a decaying city, surrounded by the most hideous monsters imaginable.
Sequel to 'The Epiphanies of Grogar and Bray'.
Chapters (4)
Sweet, this is certain to be an entertaining story. Grogar's pretty damn scary. Putting this on watch, hope you update soon!
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Forgive this mare. She knows not what she has done.
I get the feeling a shit/fan interface will be occuring in the near future!
Again, well done! Lovin' the first chapter. Grogar, you amazing bastard.
I guessed it right.
Oh Trixie, that was most unwise. You won't wriggle your way out of this one.
Oh dear.
The mane six are about to face their most evil and dangerous enemy yet. Are they up to the challenge?
I DEMAND MORE MASTERPIECE!
Good work with this you manage to make Grogar a very intimidating villain It'll be interesting to see how Trixie copes with working for him.
Very much enjoyed this chapter, Grogar's totally evil, as he should be and very intimidating, you can feel Trixie's fear. and I really, Really, really! Loved that Grogar considers Discord a loser and can back it up
plus the idea that he "funded" all those other villains is an interesting one.
I admit that this story has a lot of potential. I really like how you've depicted Grogar and reimagined the Troggles. I've never been one to imagine Grogar as the ultimate source of evil in the MLP multigenerational continuum or whatever. I've always been more of a Tirek kind of guy. Still, I liked the little references to Tirek and Squirk from G1 MLP. Also very much enjoyed Tirek's opinions of the G4 villains, especially his utter dismissal of Discord and his mild respect for Chrysalis. I don't know if there will be more to this, but I hope so. In the meantime, I shall wait.
Keep up the good work. 