This story is a sequel to Red and Gold
Many things happen in a relationship. Folding towels wrong, eating noisily, even the popping of joints can be a challenge.
But this could be Sunset's largest challenge yet.
Continuity: Equestria 616
Continuity: Equestria 616
Just saying, I won't be the only one who clicks this expecting to read something Breath of the Wild related. I feel like you might be unintentionally about to mislead a lot of people.
That said, could you not perhaps have just added this chapter to the existing story with a (deleted scene) or (non-canon) in the chapter title, so that a more relevant audience could see your unused ideas? I feel like they'd be more appreciative than randoms like me.
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The problem with adding it to the existing story is that it is part of a contest with a 10k word limit, hence why it was cut
However, I do understand your concerns. I didn't realize till
Just now I neglected to tag it as a sequel, which is now remedied.
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Oh! You're entering my friend Oroboro's contest. Neat.
Best of luck, then. The competition will be quite fierce.
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I know I had planned this storyline for a while, just needed a nudge out of the door.
Cute! Are you going to write more of them in this storyline?
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Oh yes, I am indeed.
Oh, I didn't even think about Fluttershy/Flutterbat darkside being something she and Sunset could connect and sympathize with!
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How adorable. Especially the love bite part.
Sometimes I forget that fluttershy turned into that vampire bat in season 4 of fim.