Out of the blue, a unicorn stallion falls from the sky through a crack in time and space ending up in a world that very much surprises him making new friends. Unfortunately, the dark past that he meant to leave behind follows him into the next world.
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Why does everybody have to have a dark past. I feel bad for all the OCs that are forced through mental trauma and other stuff like that.
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Well, every OC has their things that make them vulnerable.
Wait how did he get the sword?
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The sword itself is a mystery that never got expanded upon in this book. Although, I do have plans to expand its origins in the third installment.
What...? Where are their fucks going? Like "Oh, yeah, I got lazed by a Sun God, just another day in the office" "Oh, she came to apologize, not like I give a fuck anyway." I will continue for the sake of giving this a chance, but I really hope this changes, or REALLY good context is given.(As the author said.)
But WHY are you friends though? There is an experience that turns Acquaintances into friends, What was it?
I am assuming that this is after the Ticket fiasco. (I've been doing a lot of assuming here.) I'm not shitting on the story, but it's hard to understand what the fuck is going on. A prologue story would help immensely. However, you(author) said that much is explained over time, so, it would be kind of pointless to make a prologue at this point.---Even if it would make this story muck more cohesive. (Regardless of its fast pacing)