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Echo the Pony
Trying to get my name out in the brony community.... no good at anything, gonna try writing :D Male pegasus pony, white ... everything :P Also blind :)
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Are you aware how words work? Pinkiepie and Rainbowdash are not one word, you have weird spacing and random capitalization problems, massive amounts of run on sentences, periods instead of commas and vice versa... This needs a lot of work, and even then, it would still be an out of character mess. You need an editor or something before this becomes halfway decent.
919359 This is a community were Cupcakes is considered a good fanfic. I weep for this fandom.
Ever since that fic came out, the imaginations of writers were shot down a few notches. I guess people love OOC-centered lameness. It wasn't even the good kind of gory, and this fic is somehow worse.
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This is my first ever piece of writing, way to go with those encouraging words. Also please, tell me again how you know the exact plot of my story and how horrible it is. Don't comment on something if you have nothing nice to say asshole. And ya it's supposed to be a runoff from cupcakes... not a rip off of it. it takes place as said in the description many years after cupcakes.
919535 There are some websites that scan through docs to check mistakes like that, but most cost money, so I suggest you find an editor on this site. The best ones formed groups here, and there are plenty of people who will look into your fic to make it better.
Another Cupcakes fic?
I'm all for wanting to give Pinkie some darker depth, but could you make this a little less blatant on the inspiration?
Thank you for the "friendly" suggestion... nice to hear instead of insults xD i'll look around
Also for all who want to bash on me for copying cupcakes.... read the description please.... this story is a runoff of cupcakes, but it's not and doesn't plan to be an exact repeat of cupcakes. i'm trying to branch out from cupcakes because i loved the fic and disliked that it ended so abruptly. I felt like expressing some thoughts I've had, and i'm just hoping for the best out of it, don't expect much from it.
Not a bad start,my only compaint is the shortness of the chapters.Honestly,go for a 1000 words per chapter.It makes it more enjoyable to read.For now,il track this.
the first chapter is the shortest byfar haha every other chapter is/will be anywhere from 1000-3000 depending on where my words take me haha, ty for the positive feedback :) so far chapter 3 is 1300 words and i'm just getting into the core of it