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Dracochangewing


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You need a lot more in terms of chapter size. I mean both chapters barely break 1k words right?

its not quite ready to be published

You might want to include status in the story's description on if or if not there'll cross-overs with other displaced. You wouldn't want to be bothered in PM about it if you're not planning.

Great work

Took a long time for chapter two, god damn

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he just had writers block for a bit so I helped him

They are so terrible about censoring themselves. They ether need to stop trying or actually start doing what they say.

The story is not bad, but also is not very good... What I think is that it's too random, at one point they are doing something then they do something, change, do sex and then do something else, invite someone, change again... Sorry if it sound bad but it's too random...

I do find it a little odd due to her personality. Figure she'd at least want her father to know she's fine, if not have him healed enoguh to where he can at least live alone.

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Same, wish his story wasn't cancelled though...

“Didn’t I hear about a Revenge-oriented Eidolon violently rip apart a tyrannical dragon lord while singing?”

I've read this one.

Nice and That 'Brotherhood' are all IDIOT'S !!!!!

Nice to see such a friendly Goddess!!!!!

You still going to update this?

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Yes I will be updating the story but I have just hit a bit of a snag irl

Wait.. doesn't that mean that shining armor still killed his competition in order to get his position, and a whole bunch of ambassadors as well?

Meaning that italians corruption (which has taken a physical form) saved cadence from marrying a murder, and instead had her marry a man that actually does love her?

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