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kudzuhaiku
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Hehehehe. That was adorable.
I enjoyed the style of rhyme and always enjoy reading about Sky Pie. Poor Maud she seems the be doomed to have interesting children.
That prose is so purple I want to call it Twilight Sparkle.
I see this as an animated short.
Oh that puddle pronking precocious, plucky little pony, always propagating a preponderance of pursuit problems.
I was going to write a comment in prose, but fuck that shit.
it flows well, old man, we do get to see Maud letting loose and being fun, so this is exciting, will the consequences of pronking in puddles show up in a different story? So very muddy, so very wet.
Yay, Poetry.
Too cute, dead now, bai
Made it to the top of the popular list with 1100 words. Quality>quantity.
Poor
Mud...errr Maud Pie.Just thinking what would be a good analog for Sly Pie. He's the pie you just got at the pie cart, turn around and the little bugger gets away, falling out your hands into the muddy puddle.
That was fun.
And nice Eagles reference!
I'm fairly certain I just read a Dr Seuss book.
It took me getting halfway through the story until I noticed the rhyming. Quite difficult when it doesn't have the traditional poem structure of line-after-line.
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It built up like the rainstorm.
How very dare you.
Been working all day, could use a good story.
I enjoyed this short piece, in it's full rhyming glory.
You channeled Dr Seuss, and it was awesome.
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The only time I've agreed with what Trump has to say
Cudorable? Adorate? Those do not work for me, I will simply call it adorable and cute all at once and together.
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adoracute is the word your lookin for
I think Maud was startled by the Roadrunner while Sly was developing.
I can’t help but wonder just how much lingering chaos/darkness remains in Maud’s womb, and what a third foal would be like!
I don't dislike the story but the format doesn't appeal to me. Don't think I'll read any other chapter from this one...
puts a nice smile on the face
Hee. Sly Pie. Good name for a wonderful and clearly devious little thing!
Is Sly short for Sylvester?
As to Fluttershy, It is my Head Canon that
she spends so much time under her bed that she has it fixed up VERY nicely.
Some snacks (in vermin proof containers), a futon & pillows,, reading light, bottled water, some books to read