• Published 5th Aug 2017
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TCB: He who stands at the top of the Food Chain - Sweetmiss2121



Cross with Prototype. Humanity once again faces Total Extinction because of Celestia's plans, luckily the most unlikely ally survive being Consumed and is talked into saving Humanity, his name? Alex Mercer! Recently promoted from Bad Guy to Hero!

Comments ( 13 )

ok calling it now Five bucks says Alex is planning on making the remaining humans into new evolved.

so there is no way to remain human? yeah, no I chose death, I like my hands to much

Author's Note:

I am not okay, not in the slightest.

What's wrong?

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Few things keep coming up that don't make life enjoyable, most of them centered around my health.
But I Will be okay, I promise :)

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Well I hope things get better

Why Sweetie Belle? I think Alex was supposed to say Applebloom a couple of times up there. Also, there seem to be some missing spaces in between some of the words, when there are italics or bold next to regular letters.

Other than that, it's an excellent chapter. I wish you get better.

Comment posted by Sweetmiss2121 deleted May 19th, 2018

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Done! I should have managed to fix both spacing problem and the wrong name! XD I use the same file to post new chapters here and in another forum I won't name to not break the rules, but I fear that is also why sometimes there are those spacing problems, I think it's about compatibility? maybe?
I don't know, I do know that it is a pain comb the whole thing AGAIN to fix that, that's for sure! XD
Again thank you for alerting me :D

Could you do a flashback scene with fluttershy, I kinda wanna see when she tried getting between a dog and his human and the dog took a guards wing.

YEAH! I like it keep up the good work my friend!:twilightsmile:

It's been a while. Plan on flooding us with chapters

I am on the edge of my seat waiting for what comes next because so far this has been an amazing version of the Conversion Bureau your characterization of Mercer is also great because I believe he has quite a bit of room to change and shift to what a story requires

I hope the author returns someday cause i enjoyed this quite a bit

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