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"Raise This Barn, Raise This Barn, 1....2....3....4...."

The element of honesty has sadly passed. She burned in the barn she worked so hard on. It was an accident, but it had grave consequences. Apple Jack, unfortunately died. You play a pony attending her funeral. You get to see Apple Jack's funeral and burial.

Warning: contains slight gore, RariJack, and over dramatication.

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Moonlight Blitz

Moonlight Blitz #1 · Jul 26th, 2017 · · · Prolouge ·

Loved it keep up the good work.

Dusk Melody

Dusk Melody #2 · Jul 26th, 2017 · · · The Funeral ·

Applejack, not Apple Jack, and elipsis are ... not ....

iShatYouNot

iShatYouNot #3 · Jul 26th, 2017 · 1 · · The Funeral ·

I liked the story you're trying to portray, but get an editor, please get an editor. This will help you attain more views and such because the grammatical errors kept on slowly prying my interest from the story.