Stories and Art, Love 'em both! Always be you
One blush and now what?
UPDATED
Rainbow Dash has been part of the Wonderbolts for a while now and suddenly in the showers one day develops a crush, the pony she crushes on has the same feelings for her as well. Spitfire and Fleetfoot notice the two looking eye to eye for to long and try to help both of them when going through this experience. Will it be a success or will it just be a big problem? (Also it does a a bit of Rarity in there which is main part).
Cover work by me
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A nice cover and a good start. Don't get me wrong but I hope this story has a better like/dislike rating than your other stories. You're doing great work!
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thanks,
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Your Welcome!
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thanks, also I'm working on it. My first story wasn't so good I just thought
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Good luck! Practice is Key
This is really good. The art is made really well, if you want me to I can make an extra one for you, y'know just for fun! I really like it already! Keep up the good work!
A Good Way for the Tension. I laughed at spitfires yell Not to Slam the Door
Seems like a good start for them.
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Yea, this was so rushed. I've nearly ran out of ideas AHHHHH!!!!!
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I know that only too well
It was a bit rushed but i REALLY enjoyed it!
Haha
You deserved it Fleetfoot!
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Thx, I nearly ran out of ideas, thats why its rushed though
I guess, they want to make sure that Soarin and Dash are happy together
I loved it! You did great!
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Eeyyuupp
UPDATTEEE PLEEAAASSSEEEE
A new cover art is up now, I just figured that this would do instead of the other one
Ok. All wI ant to say is WOW! Them both flirting and acting is really weird, or really sweet?!
Love it my friend, love it. 
and good luck on the next chapter, 
can't wait to see how this date will go wit Rainbow Dash and Soarin Skies to. 
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I'm glad you liked it so much 
Thanks
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Your welcome my friend.
OH MY GOSH! THIS IS AMAZING! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW THE DATE GOES!
Great job!
A Ackward mmoment for both of them, yet a sucees for Spitfire and Fleetfoot.
A Flight is always a good idea
Beautiful ending!
THIS WAS AAAMMAAZZIINNNGGGG
You need to make a sequel
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I'm thinking about making a sequel but I'm so happy you loved it.
Yeah I really loved this story you made here my friend.
And hope you make new story's very soon to.
anyways, good luck on them new story's my friend. 
I think there's a double romance
in this story...Spitzes x Fleetzes!!
I know it sounds dumb but I forgot what they were
blushing over...
You do know the term "making love " means to do the do right or are you saying that they had "it" on the first date???????????????????????????????????????????????
While the story itself is good, it needs some editing.
It was good but I think it just needs A WHOLE LOT OF editing. And I think it was a bit cliche and there was a part where it had 'making love' you do know what that means right? But otherwise it was ok