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sejox


I need more time to write (this is my Ko-fi just in case you want to support me)

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am looking forward to see more of this story

I am worried for anon's mental health. But hey, at least they're high schoolers, and not frigging kindergarteners like in that messed up anime.

I can go into detail if you'd like, but there are a number of phrasing and word choices that sound odd to a native English speaker.

8282005
well, truth is that I'm not a native English speaker.

8301343
well, then hop on for the ride there is gonna be another chapter soon, a shot one to be more precise, but maybe I could release two chaps on the same day, it all depends on how this new week plays out for me.

8301408

The last chapter has serious dark undertones, regarding the treatment of Anon as "prey" of the Sirens... as others were before him.
How dark do you plan to make the story?

8308931
More of the dark stuff will come from tales of the past.
to not spoil any kind of important detail, I say that in a range from 1 to 10 the darkest this could get for Anon in the future is a 4.

excellent chapter

8313294
thanks! more chapters are on the way...

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well the only problem is time, i'll be some days without internet conecton (country issues). As for now i can only have a glimpse of internet from time to time and I'll need to use those short moments to achieve some progress with my thesis.

From the short summary and comments i really want to read this but is this story gonna stay alive to the finish?

8397375
yes, it will. I already have another two chapters ready but my lack of internet, and the fact that my third-party connection is slower than a third-world cibercafe, makes it impossible for me to edit it properly(i can't even save the changes on the website).

It will take me some time, but I promise that this fic will be completed.

8399235
Sweet i LOVE hearing an author dedicated to their story since a lot of them end up getting discontinued so I'm excited to read!

Alright im really happy i read that it was well worth and i hope you can upload the next one soon!

It will be lovely to read another chapter. Maybe I'll start my own story because of it.

Where’s the art from?

8544513
The art is from Paradoxbroken's work. Now to think of it I have been rude since I didn't put that kind of info in the description

Awesome chapter.

8544931
Glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

I didn't have the help of an editor this time.

And boy does it show in this chapter.

"Is not use!"

Seriously get that editor from the last chapter back.

8552069
Finally, someone said it!

Hopefully, my previous editor will lend me a hand again(if not... Well, let's just pray that I can find someone as good as him).

lol, that wasn't a dream

You were about to be snu snu'd by an inter-dimensional seahorse in heat :rainbowlaugh:

Really wonderful chapter. :pinkiehappy:

8665435
Thanks. I'll submit the next chapter as soon as I find a new editor

Another splendid chapter. I'm really loving this story.

Why is it Adagio has the ponytail? Sonata styles her hair that way, not Dagi. Might wanna edit this.

8676672
their hairstyles will change every couple of episodes. Currently, they look just like in the coverbook art.

8676940
But you have Adagio/Sonata mixed up in the newest chapter.

8678372
Hmm, let me check up then. Maybe I screwed up some explanations in past chapters.
Thanks for the comment btw.

I'm quite enjoying this. Am honestly surprised you don't have more comments. I have liked and favorite. Hope you can continue and finish this.

I hope you finish this story for it is quite enjoyable

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