Around the time of season 6-7 and Twilight wants to perform a spell which will change the bones in her body, making them more aero dynamic as well as sharpening the point on her wings. This will increase her ability to fly faster and with more precision, however, the spell tomes she requires are forbidden and the magic can cause serious harm. Is she ready for this? How will Rainbow Dash react to Twilights spell and her true feelings for her?
Oh, hell no!
> wants to proforma a spell
Pleas fix
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Thanks for notifying me, it has been fixed.
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Thanks for notifying me, it has been fixed.
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Cheers mate
I love your story it's really good no seriously it's really good
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Would you believe me if I told you that this is the first nicest thing I've heard about my stories, I want to thank you.
This does surprise me. Even with the numerous typos I still found a lot of potential in you as a writer. I just wish people were more constrictive with their criticism rather than just pointing out an error with nothing else to say.
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No pun intended but people like you are a rarity, people who understand how to give helpfully feedback. One that tells you what you've done wrong but doesn't put you down, one that tells you your mistakes but tells you how to fix them and someone who speaks with honesty and benevolence, thank you, your awesome
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I'm flattered by your words. I'm not a very good person to help with writing so I apologize for not being specific, but know that there are plenty of people who are like me. Maybe they're just not as vocal
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No need for apologies, you've done plenty.
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Glad I could help