Celestia has had it rough, raising both the Sun and Moon all by herself. She has had no choice given her sister Luna's recent banishment. Not to mention the emotional stress. Perhaps she has taxed herself a bit too much...
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Okay
That’s me
I chuckled. I really did. I’m lucky no one was around to hear xD
Why isn’t this more popular
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Fluffysam has read one of my stories?
About time! XD
I'm glad you liked it! And thank you for le' fav!
Hmm, maybe its like the answer to the question of how many licks does it take to get to the center of a tootsie pop? - The world may never know.
Edit: You may have seen this already. But i redid it properly cuz last time I forgot to hit the reply button and basically just commented on my own story. Now it should pop up in your notifications.
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I take forever to read friend’s stories i’m s o r r y
If this story were a tootsie pop, i’d eat it
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I mean look how long it took me to read your story. (The one where Discord gets all the Princesses)
Nah, no need to be sorry.
First time I've heard that. XD Thanks!..
Do you have any human in Equestria or ponies on earth fanfictions?
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And I don't have any in the works either.
Nope sorry.
But um, did you read or enjoy this story?
I kind've lost interest after reading part of it, but I still like your writing.
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Oh, so what you're saying is you just didn't care for the content/plot but still liked my style of writing?
Well, that's okay...At least you gave it a go.
I hope I have written (one of my other stories) or will write something to your liking. 
As you requested, here is your Review
Sorry it took so long, was sick the last days.
Anyway, your story earned an upvote
Kibitz was always a character fit for comedies, though I can say he becomes pure gold in your hands!
Really enjoyable story with a nice and dynamic flow, made me laugh plenty of times. The grammar there was alright as well, with the exception of two deadly sins—the lack of commas in dialogue before a character is addressed or another short statement (..., you know?) is added. Also, quite a few mishaps in direct speech and dialogue tags. To the
dungeonTartarus with you!More seriously now, those are fairly common mistakes. I can explain more or help you hunt them down, if you wish
Thank you for this story, it definitely brightened my day!
PS: I love this part!