Summer Fun

by Rose Quill

Dear Princess Twilight

Dear Princess Twilight,

Just letting you know that I won't be able to make the lunch with you and the girls next Wednesday. Rainbow and I have decided to take an extra five days and tour some of the Empire. Supposedly, one town is nothing but a single, giant archive! I cant wait to see it! Who knows what kind of tomes it might contain?

Also, I have a proposition for you. If you tell me your story with Luna, I'll let you proof the piece I'm writing about Rainbow and I, our mistakes and triumphs. You know, that kind of thing.

Speaking of mistakes, you wouldnt happen to know how to dismiss the cloud walking spell if it's improperly cast, would you? Asking for a friend...

Sincerely,

Moondancer

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"How long till you think she gets it?" Rainbow asked as the cloud drifted lazily through the late afternoon sky. She and Moondancer were stretched out comfortably in it's fluffy mass and she had her wing draped over the other mare's side.

"Three days, I should think, unless Muffins in doing the late night haul again," the Unicorn said, snuggling a little deeper into Rainbow's side. "Besides, even if it's longer than that, I don't think I'd ever want to be anywhere else right now, and you did cash out a weeks leave."

The Pegasus smiled, nuzzling her marefriend across the back of her neck. "And when this cloud fills with rain water?"

Moondancer grinned. "Well. I guess I'll have to charm a pretty Pegasus for help," she purred. "Know any good ones?"

Rainbow leaned in and kissed the mare.

"I might know one," she said before leaning in again for another kiss.

Comments

[Hobbestc]

This was cute. I don't think i'd want to be stuck to a cloud for three days though. What if you gotta go potty????

[Rose Quill]

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She isn’t stuck to the cloud. She made a mistake in the casting and instead of adding clouds to the surfaces she could walk on, she swapped ground and clouds...so she can get down, but its not advised

[Hobbestc]

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Lol. Opps.

[ClosetBrony]

Ah, so you've done it again and you did not disappoint. I so, so love this ship. Thank you very much for sharing. A like and favorite as always.

I noticed some typos.
Ch. 1

"Hi, Dash," she replied as the cyan Pegasus landed nest to her.

"Hi, Dash," she replied as the cyan Pegasus landed *next to her.

Ch. 2

"Are you alright?" Moondancdr asked.

*Moondancer

"I know," Rainbiw said, head hanging.

*Rainbow

turning the page in he latest Daring Do book.

*the

relaxing week at Rainbiw Falls,"

*Rainbow

Ch. 3
and stared at hervhard in the eyes.
*her hard

into her embrace, turni g slightly

into her embrace, *turning slightly

Ch. 4

I'm writing about Rainbiw and I, our mistakes and triumlhs. You know, that kind of thing.

I'm writing about *Rainbow and I, our mistakes and *triumphs. You know, that kind of thing.
Well, this written while they're on the cloud so we can hoof-wave these as typos that happened when Rainbow nibbled on Moon's ear or neck or something.

[Rose Quill]

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You!

[Ms_Fruit_Bat]

Hehe, this is a nice sequel!

[Rose Quill]

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When I get some free time there’s another one on my writing list for this pairing, but I have to finish another story for the continuity first.

[Ms_Fruit_Bat]

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Yo, that's totally awesome!
I definitely look forward to it!