Timber is heartbroken after he finds his fillyfriend being mounted by another classmate. After he runs off into the woods he finds a timberwolf puppy who comforts him. They hit it off and Timber thinks that maybe this puppy could be his fillyfriend.
So I take it that you didn't enjoy this chapter? What exactly did you dislike about it? It would help to know for me as the Writer, so I can think on your constructive criticism.
So Watersports isn't going to be a feature? Aww. Missed oppertunity to have him 'water' her by pissing on/in her >.> But yeah, most people aren't into that. Kill Joys <.<
Also maybe instead of Silver Spoon, have it be Diamond? After all, in the show it's shown Silver Spoon herself really isn't a jerk, but more of just following and pleasing DT. Where as Diamond, went out of her way to do anything for 'Power'. And it would be like her to dump someone for someone richer.
9841311 What about a flower bud? They're usually firm yet smooth and flowers are often associated with fertility and life, so it fits well thematically.
Could even mess with the idea of the bud being a natural way to signal availability to males once the female is physically fully mature; the bud flowering means 'I'm fertile', while closed means 'I'm already pollinated/don't bother'. It's similar to how animals IRL use smells/looks to attract a mate while putting a spin on it based on plants.
If you enjoy visual puns, you could make the bud/flower look like the one on the Dogwood tree.
Interesting idea. Albeit the bud seems to be made out of several parts, so I'm not sure how well that would be to use. Also the open, closed concept is interesting, though I wouldn't involve petals in it. Not sure if that would be the best way for it. But maybe I change my mind.
The idea is really interesting after all, so it is something that I need to think about.
“Look! I made you a perfect place to sleep!” Timber exclaimed proudly. And indeed the puppy walked forward to the edge of the bed and took a look at it. Then she simply turned around and laid back on the bed.
That's not actually unexpected.
‘Is it because she is part tree? Does she absorb water like trees with her roots? Well, if timberwolf paws can be compared to tree roots.’
If that is the case, he may only needs to water her and let her stay exposed to sunlight.
It was funny to think about, that he as a wood craftspony would find a literal wooden wolf as a marefriend.
Yup, quite an irony.
“Well, make sure to hurry up. Neither your father nor I would approve if your food gets cold just because you forget the time. Remember, wood-” “Yes. Wooden discipline is a life’s work,” he said, waving her off, despite the door being closed.
Don't be too hard to him. I mean, he is literally making love with wood...
Good to see an update! I wonder how long he manages to keep Wolfie a secret, and how the rest will react once it gets out (assuming it gets public in the first place).
But I have to ask: Why the "Zipporwhill"-tag? At least for now she didn't get mentioned yet.
Omg I think it's soooo adorable how Timber is trying to figure out how to take care of Wolfie. Btw I love name pun. Timber and Wolfie.... Timberwolf. Just what you'd expect a young colt to name a Timberwolf pup especially when his name is Timber lol. Kinda reminds me of when I was 8 and my mom had got me a Himalayan kitten and I named her Fluffy. Or my goddaughter who got a Dalmatian when she was 8 or 9 and named het Spot. Lol
Good chapter. Glad to see it continued
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what the fuck what the fuck what the fuck
When will ch3 be good
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A soft seedpod? Or maybe just a small sweet smelling fruit?
Though what Jaro45 suggested could work too.
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Glad to continue and I hope you will like the future chapters as well!
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So I take it that you didn't enjoy this chapter? What exactly did you dislike about it? It would help to know for me as the Writer, so I can think on your constructive criticism.
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I just finished Chapter 2 this week, so it will be a bit. Though I do plan to release it this year at the very least.
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A hard decision I still have to make, though that fruity idea sounds interesting. Maybe I go for something like that. So thanks for the suggestion!
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So Watersports isn't going to be a feature? Aww. Missed oppertunity to have him 'water' her by pissing on/in her >.> But yeah, most people aren't into that. Kill Joys <.<
Also maybe instead of Silver Spoon, have it be Diamond? After all, in the show it's shown Silver Spoon herself really isn't a jerk, but more of just following and pleasing DT. Where as Diamond, went out of her way to do anything for 'Power'. And it would be like her to dump someone for someone richer.
Back and ready for more!!
Nice, an update!
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What about a flower bud? They're usually firm yet smooth and flowers are often associated with fertility and life, so it fits well thematically.
Could even mess with the idea of the bud being a natural way to signal availability to males once the female is physically fully mature; the bud flowering means 'I'm fertile', while closed means 'I'm already pollinated/don't bother'. It's similar to how animals IRL use smells/looks to attract a mate while putting a spin on it based on plants.
If you enjoy visual puns, you could make the bud/flower look like the one on the Dogwood tree.
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Interesting idea. Albeit the bud seems to be made out of several parts, so I'm not sure how well that would be to use. Also the open, closed concept is interesting, though I wouldn't involve petals in it. Not sure if that would be the best way for it. But maybe I change my mind.
The idea is really interesting after all, so it is something that I need to think about.
Nice to see an update on this again, hope to see more of this again soon.
That's not actually unexpected.
If that is the case, he may only needs to water her and let her stay exposed to sunlight.
Yup, quite an irony.
Don't be too hard to him.
I mean, he is literally making love with wood...
Good to see an update!
I wonder how long he manages to keep Wolfie a secret, and how the rest will react once it gets out (assuming it gets public in the first place).
But I have to ask: Why the "Zipporwhill"-tag?
At least for now she didn't get mentioned yet.
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She will appear soon enough~
Omg I think it's soooo adorable how Timber is trying to figure out how to take care of Wolfie.
Btw I love name pun. Timber and Wolfie.... Timberwolf. Just what you'd expect a young colt to name a Timberwolf pup especially when his name is Timber lol. Kinda reminds me of when I was 8 and my mom had got me a Himalayan kitten and I named her Fluffy. Or my goddaughter who got a Dalmatian when she was 8 or 9 and named het Spot. Lol