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Timeless River


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Seven hundred years in the future, Equestria is a pony-ruled nation, no longer alien to things such as pain and war. The Elements of Harmony are long-gone, and Luna and Celestia are but just a old mare's tale. All seems peaceful. However, an ancient threat is arising. A menace that had long since dropped out of history before the rule of the Alicorn Sisters. With the threat, comes the cold, the winter. And the promise of a new Ice Age.

This is my first story, constructive criticism is wanted, etc.


(Cover image pending)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 4 )

A story about Equestria under an Ice Age?

I'm intrigued. :moustache:

Comment posted by Johannes Gutenpress deleted Feb 3rd, 2013

Edits made. I think I'm a bit happier with the story now. It's certainly better. I think.

Still need a pre-reader/reviewer.

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