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2018 A year that will be better than the last... Or so I thought when suddenly as the clock ticked down I saw a shooting star and made a wish... I never expected it to come true. Immediately after the ball dropped I saw a blinding light and then I knew I must have been dreaming.
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oh nice. although maybe there are some things you could add to make yourself on one hand even more op and on the other hand not to much so?
About time till next update
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next chapter is about halfway through
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any suggestions?
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I think you should have put in romance tag and have it between OC and Luna
what is up with people's obsession with making things op
i don't get it please explain
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might do that... might not... wait and see
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People wanting to be OP is just a thing we make our characters with (In this case I gave my O.C. all the powers I wish I had)
His cutie mark is the symbol of the Jedi?
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Yep the symbol of the Jedi order
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... Give the man-pone a pet Porg.
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he already is getting a phoenix
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I guess that's where I don't understand from cuz I don't want to be OP I want to be powerful but not overpowered life's no fun if everything's too easy
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there is gonna be a close battle after plot development *hint hint*
Also, look at my funny profile pic.
this is lookin' like a great fic
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Thanks for the follow and fave
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you're welcome
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It's not that!!!!! I swear!!!
This looks interesting, although some things don't add up very well, like, why did just two questions in a one minute period convince them he wasn't a threat despite being from another world? Also this could be better if more time was spent adding details that felt like are missing, like more questions for example.
This is just advice, and in my opinion it would improve the story a bit. Good luck by the way
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I did this In between classes and I have assessments happening right now. ok! And thanks, I'm gonna need all the luck I can get... After getting hit by a small cube that has been later dubbed writer's block
Classic Pinkie.
few and far between.
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I'm using a bit of how it's used in common speech patterns
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Yes classic pinkie
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Alright, alright. i'll take it. Just saying, you're kinda mangling the idiom.
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Wait wait wait... Manglevignette.wikia.nocookie.net/freddy-fazbears-pizza/images/3/3d/FNAF2MangleJumpscare.gif/revision/latest?cb=20150321233346
ps I know what you mean but the last half of the chapter was done in between classes
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1: I'm still never going to play anything in that game series.
2 Fair enough.
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1. Agreed even though I have done a few nights the title screen gets adrenaline in my veins
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Unlike some, i just don't like horror for the sake of horror.
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Same... I watch other's get scared and laugh at what people do when scared but I sometimes watch horror movies when nothing else is on and yell at how stupid people are in horror movies
Haven't finished any stories yet, let alone on my phone, but if your problem is about typing the text then I can confidently suggest you this:
Use MessagEase keyboard!
https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.exideas.mekb
With some practice it's reasonably easy to reach typing speed of 30 WPM or more, maybe even do touch typing. It also has convenient cursor controls for when you need to edit already typed text. Don't forget to look at in-app tutorials, some neat features are really unobvious.
P.S. If there's "Windows" or "i" before your "Phone" then you might be out of luck. I have no idea if there are any alternatives outside Android.
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I mean as in the screen size and such... I use Android lol
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Well, that's no ordinary keyboard. It is very compact, so you can put your phone in portrait and have almost all the screen to yourself. It has just 9 "keys" and all other letters are entered with swipes, so the keys are large enough to never miss them anyway. Bonus: it's designed to be used single-handedly and even blindly, so it's convenient to type while walking or standing in public transport, and without even looking once you get used to it.
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I prefer PC and laptop keyboards...
I see a typo there.
Again.
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Crap...
Fixed
Not to be rude, but this story starts to resemble a Mary Sue tale.
Want to become your alicorn OC? Bam! Ponies meet you and there is no suspicion whatsoever. Oh, and you have godlike powers now!
The story has been on my tracking list for a long while, and I do hope you have something to dilute that "It's going way too smoothly!" feeling and balance your character. And unless you have a good reason to do otherwise, I'd say it's better done sooner in the story then later.
In short, try to look at your own story like some random member of your target audience who knows nothing of your plans and, by default, does not care. You need to make them care. Otherwise you might mess up even the best story idea ever.
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There is suspicion... Just forgot to point it out
Also based on Alicorn of music
Funny. Any sort of advanced tech we ever manage to create will probably bear no relation to actual magic, simply because most authors would call it too OP. At least I can hope (and also because the other possibility is because I imagine that it /grumpy rant/ would get locked down with crippleware rather than create logical defenses to it or a magical militia... /end grumpy rant/.)
I say that because your OC fell into what I imagine that sort of thing would likely allow.
The Force might be redundant, considering that Unicorns do ALL of that already, and that your way invites Sith.
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I'm thinking of using the force as a secondary magic or something like that
Is that a Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy reference i smell?
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That, it is
I KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO WRITE ON A PHONE!!! NOW GIMME DAT MUFFIN!
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pre00.deviantart.net/5db3/th/pre/i/2016/097/4/e/mlp_muffin_basket_by_reitanna_seishin-d9y2snw.png you get whole basket
Dats what dem ponies said
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Yep references all around
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I’ve already watched that video like 50 times now and i still love it.
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Tru
I don't know why this has so Amy dislikes this is awesome and the dbz reference was funny