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Ironfire Skies


A female with fiery personality and ready to write what comes from her heart. My writing is complex with my own personal twist, also a Christian.

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Rainbow Dash, now a wonderbolt, is practicing her flying one night. Her close friend/teammate Soarin sees her alone and decides to accompany her. The two pegasi talk about their interests, they both realize that they have a lot in common. They even went through similar situations during their previous lifetimes.

But, something is bothering Soarin. For the longest time, he has a huge crush on Rainbow Dash, ever since she won the Best Young Fliers Competition two years ago. He's afraid to tell the mare how he feels about her. But Soarin tells himself to stallion up and tell her how he feels. Still, he's too nervous. He realized that confessing his feelings to the mare he really liked was going to be hard for him. But, he tries.
Will he finally tell her about his feelings? Will Rainbow return his affections?

Character(s):
-Soarin
-Rainbow Dash
-Fleetfoot

I do not own the cover art.

Author Note: To make your understanding clear about my writing, I do not always feature romance in the stories I write. Since it's difficult to write about Romance, I'll try my best to make the actions of the characters as sappy as possible (if needed).

Inspired by the song To the Sky by Owl City.


Prequel to Oxygen.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 51 )

8247787
Thank you for reading Moonlightprincess, I really appreciate it.

But there is a reason why the confession part is a little fast, I wanted Soarin to be kind of nervous when confessing his feelings after harboring it for a such a long time. When it comes to writing about romance, my style of writing is really random, the confession can be slow or fast. It really depends on my mood. My mood was so random today that I wanted the character to be strange.....as I would say it.

The narrating tense of the story is just my style of writing. I love to tell how the character (Soarin) went through and how he felt way before confessing his feelings towards a mare.

Sorry, hope you understand.

8247990
Thanks Stev. Why was it really cute?

8248236
This story is completed. I changed the status just now, sorry about that.

The cover art looks familiar. Where'd you get it?

8248312 I recognize it. It's called "Do You Want To Fly With Me?"

Original HERE.

AAAAAAAAAAAAWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS IS SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!!
I JUST CAN'T TALK ANYMORR!!!!
:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

8251753
Glad you enjoyed this one-shot, this is my first one-shot I've ever written that is SoarinDash.
Sorry, took me so long to get it released.

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11521662
Thanks for reading. This is my first one shot.

Do you have any other stories about this ship? This is one of my favorite ships.

11523064
I recently wrote a story titled Oxygen, it contains SoarinDash.
Check it out if you want, I won't force you.

Aww this is a pretty nice story and seeing how Rainbow Dash really miss her friends so much I thought it was like during the season 9 but when I looked the date this is way before season 9 came around but still it's really nice and seeing Rainbow Dash and Soarin admitting how much they really care for each other and even share a kiss this was a pretty nice story keep up the good work

11542376
I wrote this story when I was 17, I’m 22 now. But I’m glad you thought the story was nice, I thought it was too cheesy when I wrote it back in 2017. At least people like this story. I mean, I wasn’t expecting 40 something likes.

11542467
Well it may be cheesy but at this point I think it's still pretty sweet and hey it's still pretty good but it's always good to improve throughout the years I'm still not too great of writing stories but anyway no problem

11542523
I’m sure your stories are okay. It just needs some work.
What genre do you specialize in writing.

11542595
Well I basically just kind of go for it and hopefully for the best and also thanks I appreciate that

This is a cool story! I like the "Haywaii" idea.

"No problem Crash", she said. Fleetfoot let go of her embrace from Rainbow Dash and headed down the hall to her bedroom.

and

"Crash, I heard you crying. Can you tell me what's wrong?" Fleetfoot asked, concerned.

Why does Fleetfoot call RD "Crash?"
Also, I noticed it changed perspectives (e.g. "Dash opens the door. She noticed that no-one was there).

11544257
Thank you for pointing out the mistakes. But it’s been so long since I ever reread the chapter. But glad ya like it. :twilightsmile:

11544296
Nonetheless, it's great! Thank you for makin' the awesome story! It is "ze magics." :coolphoto:

11544299
Agreed. Thank you for being a reader of this story.

11544357
No, thank YOU for being a- Oh wait. That doesn't work- :twilightoops:

11545127
What are you trying to say?:rainbowlaugh:

11545191
I was trying to say "No, thank YOU for being a reader of this story," in retaliation from your "thank-you." :twilightoops:

11546239
Aren’t ya a little too late for that?:trollestia:

11546787
Girl, you’re crazy. But cool.

11546789
I would spam crazy Pinkies (in 1 (one) message), but I won't.
:scootangel:

11546912
Self-control is a good part of life. It helps you not commit sudoku.
(IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN :rainbowdetermined2:)

11548218
I controlled myself not to spam crazy Pinkies.
Self
Control.
:scootangel:

11548330
(starts bursting out singing all of the mlp songs at one time while playing ten instruments)

11549036
You are hilarious :rainbowlaugh:! You keep these kinda antics, you’ll be a comedian for sure.

11549164
My comedic talents come with time.
This isn't even the start of my randomness.
I have the power of GOD AND MLP ON MY SIDE!

11549181
Wonderful. I use to attend church before, but I still believe in God and our savior Christ. My real name is Christy

11549311
It is. I miss going to worship services, it’s been a long time.

11549377
Oh, rip. Maybe I should make a christian FiM group...
Found one!
There's a lot of 'em.

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