I know there wasn't as much blatant sexual activity in this chapter, but BDSM isn't always about sex.

very true, at the core its about mutual trust.

Okay did you have to make Rarity more of a knock out than she already is? Geez I just about smacked my face into my keyboard back there. And this is so far the first time I've read a well thought out Flutterdom. It's so out of nowhere and forced most of of the time.

8195401
Here, here!!!
When assertive Fluttershy came into play, I was pretty much calling her Miss. Fluttershy as well. Add in Rarity in a sheer bikini and...
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8195483 Nosebleeds, or fainting take your pick. Either one is an easy to understand response to what we're being given in this one.

When assertive Fluttershy came into play, I was pretty much calling her Miss. Fluttershy as well.

I see that I'm not the only one then.

That part where she scared the shit out of Rainbow had me laughing my butt off too.

8195401 You should check out my vlog post where i kinda of say how i'm approaching this story

8195551 I might do that later, if I knew where to look anyway.

8195559 i'm sorry, that was supposed to be blog post. and my blog is here on my profile.

One of your commas ran away again...

Very good second chapter, I am satisfied with it and rather intrigued. A wonder of how the slumber party will go with Rainbow being afraid of Fluttershy. Most interesting.

8195578 Okay.

Rarity'll pull Sci-Twi off all right.

8195547
Your telling me!
Though to be honest I don't know which of the "death stares" I know are the best.
Flutter-Dom's stare... or Miya Asama's 'Hannya Mask' from Sekirei. And for reference...
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That is Miya 'the purple haired woman' when she is 'miffed'.

8195822 Okay I am not pissing her off. Supermassive eep much? That was downright scary man.

8195836
You think that's bad check you her bio on the Sekirei wiki. Or better yet look up "Sekirei Miya owns Seo" and see the power of the hannya mask. I would put the video up... but I'm on my iPhone right now. But here's the link.
https://youtu.be/B2dCF9k7BEk

8195900 Whoa! Over the phone no less. Yeah not getting her or Fluttershy's bad side.

8195908
Then word of advise... If Miya says anything with the word 'forbidden' in it... Run...

8195920 Got it, and do not but in on a private conversation between Fluttershy and anyone. That is also cause to run like crap.

8195924 well it was more her frustration at being interrupted and subsequently ignored when she was going to politely request to be left along with Sunset.

8195943 Yeah Rainbow can be overbearing sometimes. And knowing her for as long as she has doesn't prevent Flutters from getting frustrated with her from time to time. That's why they are often the most "drama prone" pairing in the mane six.

Now, this is a very nice read so far. I totaly do not mind the pacing, I find it refreshing infact. As much as I like to read fic where the protags are allready in a working BDSM relationship, with everything figured out , seeing a couple bloom into one is just as good, if not better.^^ Plus I enjoy Fluttershy as a dome, if she is not overdone and over the top in her behavior, same with a submissive Sunset. I am really curious to see things play out once they delve into the "real stuff". And remember, it is not real BDSM until everyone involved laughed heartily at least once during a session. Talking from expierence here.

Also, I admit, I had to google what a "sheer bikini" is. Holy hell Rarity, you might as well just wear a coat of painting, that might have the same effect, if not be more decent. Way to make a bombshell even... ehrm... bombshell-ier, if you excuse my Pinkie Pie there.Might also be because I am a sucker for pierced nips and shaved V´s (and hot, hot Rarity :3). That aside, Raras little talk with AJ, jupp, I like it. Very nice setting up for the next chapter(s).

8195089
Amen to that.

8195974 Personal experience eh?
I joke i joke. But, my mentality is "a teasing build up" can be just as much fun as the actual act. If you want a better understanding of what I'm trying to do with this story, feel free to read my blog entry about it.

very good chapter loved it and look forward to some more of this fun for sunset and flutters

also i laughed my ass off at the bit with flutter shy scaring rainbow

8196017
Yaya, personal expierence.
I have read that post and I say, I agree with you.

8196050 I took a look at your page and, I must say, I'm pleasantly surprised to find an inquisitor's emblem on one of your stories.

8196078
I played an Witch Hunter army in table top before GW ruined them and I still love them. Right now, I am working on continuing that particular story. Not gonna let my baby die, nuh-uh. If you like not 1000% lore friendly but somewhat otherwise friendly Inquisitors and pony shenanigans, you could give it a looksee?^^° #shamelessselfpromotion

8196089 I'll definitely check it out. I'm used to play orks myself. I'm looking to get into Dark Angels now though.

8195974 if you like this story, then you should definately check out this one as well. I find both that one and this one a great read so far.

8196089 Wasn't the only thing they ruined, sadly. I gave up on the tabletop game. I still enjoy the fluff/lore though.

8196108 WAAAGH!

8196108
I am looking to start a Dark Eldar army now, let´s see how long they last before GW kills them too for whatever reason.

8196176
Ya, the fluff is still the best. I still give em a last chance. Orks allways had been fun to play against, because of their fluff. Also, I have this particular story on my read list. What a coincidence huh?^^

8196652 used to be an Ork player for 40K and skaven in fantasy. but after age of failmar and some other nonsense i decided to spend my money elsewhere. These days I'm more into Warmahordes and Infinity. But I still have over 100 novels from the black library.

8196895
Skaven, ho!^^ *deep sigh* Why must they allways kill what we love?

8196948 Neek neek. I wish I knew.

If you ever want tips of BDSM, ask me. Me and my husband are in the scene, and I know quite a bit about it.

I'm liking the pace of the story. Like you said, BDSM isn't just about blatant sex all the time. In fact, more often than not it's a head space.

8196895 Cryx for the win!

8196652 They do seem to severely nerf anything that isn't space marines (specifically blood angels)

8197046 Oh i'm in the life style as well. I have been for about 15 years now. We should totally compare notes tho. lol

8197077 Well, I have Discord open while I work on a story today.

It's nice to know that there are more people writing this stuff that are actually IN the lifestyle.

8197074 For the glory of Menoth!

also Convergence, when i feel heretical.

8197082 Any idea when you will update yours by any chance, Sapphire?

8197134 The next chapter is in production. I apologize for the wait. I'm having a bit of an issue in terms of plot, but it's starting to come together.

8197160 no worries, it takes as long as it takes. With a story as good as that i don't mind the wait. cause you know it will be worth it.

8197160 You can bounce ideas off me if you'd like.

8198350 Thanks. I'm starting to figure it out though. Out talk actually helped quite a bit.

“By all that’s sacred Pinkie! Why?!” Dash cried, placing her hand on her chest, feeling her erratic heartbeat.

Because your fear is funny!