Twilight senses something troubling and teleports to Canterlot. This leads to a series of events that force her to face feelings that she had tried to hide.
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Great update. I like where this is going.
Great job my friend. Cant wait for more
cant wait for moe, i do kind of hope that twilight and starswirl figure out away to bring sundancer and midnight back to full life.
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I will neither confirm nor deny that such a plan exists.
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First, thank you for following my story.
Second, about your complaints . . .
1) Conspiracy to Defraud the Crown- If she imprisons Golden Flash for that, she'd have to do the same to every other noble as well. Instead of placing all of the nobles in the Royal Dungeons, she just stops their attempts. (Yes, she could imprison all of them and bring in a new group of nobles, but I have something else in mind. It just won't happen until later.)
2) Attempted Fraud- Same as above
3) Assault on a Princess - He didn't attack Twilight, he just wanted the book.
4) Treason or Planned Assassination- Yes, his words were threatening, but he didn't DO anything to them. It's not illegal to talk. Even if it was, he didn't say that he was going to kill anyone.
5) Trespassing- Before court starts, there are ALWAYS ponies waiting for Celestia (and now Artemis as well). That means she allows them in the castle early . . . Therefore, he's not trespassing.
*The most important reason he hasn't been imprisoned is that I have a plan for Golden Thunder's next actions. Golden Flash needs to be free so they can complete them.
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In response to your response.
1) and 2) she would have less nobles trying to steal and less petitions to deal with i call that a win win situation.
3) Assault is any unwanted or unsolicited contact (includes something as small as A fart). And as magic is an extension of a pony's self I believe it would qualify especially a princess Imagine the trouble you would get in ripping the a book out of the hands of any world leader's hands.
4) Threatening another person with harm explicit or implied is against the law.
5) Trespassing- well i said that would be trumped up.
I mean come on what's the good of being the leader of a nation if you can't have you enemies locked up? oh wait that does come off a bit fascist. Oh well .
Also I am just joking about here don't i mean to cause you any consternation. And i understand why he got away as always the greatest super power to have on your side is "the plot"
awesome story
So much info to take in...can't process it all at once! i'll give my thoughts at other time;)
p.s: here's my thoughts so in your universe starswirl is dead not complete asshole! (in the show cannon) and what the hell is up with scoots parents!? at least in my story dusk's adopted parents get ruined by him. let me explain in chapter 5 dusk finally snaps at the sentry's telling them he knows the truth as well with saying that "i'm going to find my real family and maybe then i'll get love & respect I deserve!" flash's dad hits dusk on the left cheek, darkly said That is the first and last time you'll ever hit me again! runs back upstairs to his room(before that dusk brought a train ticket one way to the crystal empire at ponyville train station before school starts. spike sees him asking why was he at the train station, he makes a reasonable lie responding it was a math problem for cheerilee on assignment. also has been avoiding the dragon for a month cause in his dream confessed in song that he loves spike in ch.4. when asking the colt if they would've gotten mad sleeping over a friend's house. he replies maybe. this worries the dragon demanding dusk tell him what's going on,no words are said. after school ends dusk tells spike that he can't share everything with him even if they're friends" the dragon leaves and heads back to the castle. dusk takes the offer of cmc to their clubhouse to over what happen with spike. everything turns well enough except finding from scoots and sweetie that spike has a crush on rarity. the colt sadly walks home. meanwhile twilight concern that spike moodiness will bring back his 'dragon greed' again has him go over to rarity's since he hasn't been there in a long time. it doesn't go well at all...the two talk about dusk, spike confesses his love for rarity not hiding or lying about it. rarity says the most hurtful painful words to spike. his anger boils up,he leaves running to apple acres into big mac's chest crying. being the kind helpful stallion mac stops working, info aj to get twilight for spike's very upset. they go into the barn laying on the hayloft he vents to mac and the stallion in turn reveals to him he's bisexual. spike falls asleep in mac's chest. aj and twilight arrive but first mac asks the princess to use her magic for he doesn't want to wake up the little guy. she does, finally mac tells them what happen twilight is shocked and aj pissed that rarity could do something so awful. words exchange from apple siblings but ends with all three going to see rarity the next day.
At sentry's house - dusk isn't eating first base asks if he's okay. his dad makes a comment as well but more condescending. the colt replies why the fuck do you care! then announces he's gay and the dad tells him to his room. later on tells dusk to come down they decided to send to a special camp to fix him. dusk refuses as base's dad goes What did you just say.)
onto to chapters 6 & 7 - with dusk happily free from them, he becomes talk of the town. spike gets it from the cmc and diamond tiara(nearly scaring the filly at his nearly threating voice) for a bit more info.
in the crystal empire dusk finds flash sentry, shows him and another guard on duty(he concealed the bruise with his magic.) the spot where he got hit.
many things happen dusk sent letters to spike, the cmc rumble & silver spoon(surprisingly)
rumble gets his cutie mark, cheese sandwich drops in from a plane or zeppelin and wants his party at crystal empire. twilight hears the news about this and dusk being in crystal empire, refuses at first but then says "i'm coming with you!" so the crystal empire isn't taken by surprise. after the party's over (everyone sleeps over at crystal castle for there's no hotel...that we know of!) tears, truth and love are shown between spike and dusk.
many scenes later twilight tells her parents the truth and it doesn't go well.
the parents and celestia are words back and forth, spike realizes silently in his head "I'm in love with my brother" dusk comes out from taking a shower telling every pony to shut up!
flash is disillusioned and heartbroken.
a plan set by dusk is formed by sending a letter to rumble asking his brother thunder lane for help(which a ragtag team of lyra, bonbon, doctor whooves & derpy) justice is severed! twilight took back dusk as her son, flash sentry got sole custody of his little brother until he is of age, spike & dusk are free to be together...this goes beyond just a sexual relationship. one last thing they have a child together & it's Kirin (pony/dragon hybrid)
p.s: that idea for the camp bit came from another story called https://www.fimfiction.net/story/166019/spike-comes-out
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1) Star Swirl is dead because I began writing this before he came back from limbo in the show. I already had a role for him and, since this story is an alternate universe, I saw no reason to change it. No, he isn't an asshole.
2) Everyone will find out what Scootaloo's parents have been up to soon.
I have two new chapters written and am almost done with a third. Once that is finished, I'll put all three through the proofreading process and post them.
P.S.- Thank you for more information on your story. Still, I can't wait for you to post the full version (once you get things settled, of course). I'd like read the whole thing, not just the summary.
Wait really, I swear she should be larger her domain is magic.
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I honestly expected her to be around 1.5, if not two times as large as Cellie.
Twi got da powa!