Twilight senses something troubling and teleports to Canterlot. This leads to a series of events that force her to face feelings that she had tried to hide.
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This story suffers from an almost childlike writing style. Its entire story's progression feels like there's a clear idea of what direction the plot should take, and the story itself only serves to set up the most immediate and direct path to the 'next step', no matter how ham-fisted it may come across when strung together.
It really doesn't help that the side characters all seems to be baby-demanding sociopaths.
Hmm maybe this one should be called royal slumber party