• Member Since 28th Jan, 2015
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ImNoPony


I don't write pony stories. I mainly write about humans or Equestria Girl stories.

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Not long after Twilight Sparkle being crowned as a princess and risen to Alicornhood, she moved to Canterlot to help spark a new golden age for Equestria. However, when she gets there, she notice that the other princesses are acting strangely and saying that Equestria will have a new ruler: Queen Chrysalis.

Shocked, she try to warn everyone and try to snap the princesses to their senses. But... She is too late. Chrysalis was there and is already prepared to add Twilight to her new kingdom.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 21 )

Okay this is interesting, continue.

Before I read this, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

8181151 I tried to make the story twisted, scary and unnerving. Just the idea that idols falling to the dark side and forcing to join yourself is something that thought made it "dark"

I believe my profile pic summarizes my interest quite well.

Oh just wait until Discord gets word that Chrysalis is doing another 'Invasion' of Equestria, I can't wait for him to show up, turn Chrysalis into a Earth Pony, not a changeling transformation but a full on reformation of changeling to pony and staying as pony, then he goes and changes the Princesses back to normal.

8181528

come on man, that is too big of a cop out

8181612 I already finished part 2. It just that I'm going to wait a week before I publish it.

I have one peeve about this...you make it sound like the "lingification" process is some sort of mind wipe/mind control, I believe this not to be true

When a pony becomes a ling, their loyalty does become that to serve the Queen, but otherwise they maintain their will and free spirit...basically they remain themselves but just in ling form

8191328 I see your point and that sounds like a really fascinating way to do it. But then again, this is fanfiction and "changelingfication" isn't canon so I can do whatever I want with it.

So when the next chapter going to be out?

8212797
Um, actually, this was meant to be a quick side project that I wanted to do. It's already finished. I'm not planning to continuing it any further. However, I realised that it was still marked as incomplete until I notice your comment. So um... yeah. It's marked under complete now.

8213089
Ok so what are you making next?

8213274
Right now, I like to finish of my Friendship Games: Friendship Makes Magic fic (Which would make my “Friendship Makes Magic” series into a complete trilogy). After that, I want to do a one-shot where Pinkie becomes a Changeling (completely unrelated to this story) and treats it like she just got a tattoo.

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Ok anything else?

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Um... That is about it for now

The ending sent tingles through me! I love when that happens! And my Pinkie Sense only does that when it's awesome!

Comment posted by Phage deleted May 12th, 2023
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