I'm a long time science fiction and animation fan who stumbled into My Little Pony fandom and got caught -- I guess I'm a Brony Forever now.
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Spring, YOH 1507: Fluttershy has built her animal sanctuary. Having estabished her own little domain, she feels certain deep stirrings ... and starts to act upon them.
It's time for Fluttershy to start to take her true place in the world.
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Interesting premise, I can't wait to read more.
Thank you very much for the recommendations, I'm always happy to read good new changeling fics.
Is there ever a chance of you going more into Hidden? She sounds interesting.
Most people's reaction to this episode surprise and sadden me. They say nothing happened when this was one of the most momentous Fluttershy episodes in the series.
But that's a discussion for another venue. Suffice to say, I'm eagerly looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Also, thank you for pointing me to Phoenix_Dragon and Ardashir's work.
(And yes, the McColts would be very creative architects. The unusual arms race of plants vs. carpentry would lead to all kinds of innovation.)
8139799 I had kind of the same problem with it that I did with 'Times are a Changeling' -- yeah, a thing happened, but it happened in a straightforward fashion with no twists. Like they had the outline for a story and just published that instead of actually going and writing it.
This one wasn't as bad because at least they had some cute bits with the animals.
But having what happened be important just makes it *worse* if it wasn't done right. Sort of like the Crusaders' Cutie Marks.
Berrow really suck at writing tv animated episodes. Fluttershy had a really big thing in this episode and just like Dash becoming a wonderbolt in Newbie Dash it was ruined by a very mediocre and predictable writing. Both episodes should have been written by Larson, Rogers or at least Confalone as they were the milestones in character development for both of these characters.
8140257 Honestly, I don't mind it when the show does a straightforward story, mainly because its' focus is still mostly slice of life, meaning there won't be a lot of high drama situations
I like this start, very promising.
But one thing is bugging me. You wrote: "Queen Hidden and her friendship with Tree Hugger is entirely my own creation." Whose friendship? This Queen Hidden or Tree Hugger? Is Tree Hugger "Treesie"?
If you talk about Fluttershy, then I don't think it's your own creation. Their friendship is a thing I'm sure of that. Or that's my interpretation from the Tree Hugger episode in "Making Friends, but keep Discord" anyway.
And no that's no critic a la: "Liar!"
More like: "I'm confused and feel stupid for having to ask."
I guess I'm just tired now so I have to ask this stupid question. ^^
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Tree Hugger's friendship with Queen Hidden.
8145068 Thanks.
Glad to see you back writing, and I'm looking forward to more!
I'm rather interested how you'll work the S6 finale into your verse? It's interesting that Fluttershy doesn't mention Thorax in her list of changeling monarchs.
http://alexwarlorn.deviantart.com/journal/MLP-Season-7-Episode-5-commentary-679195905 Fluttershy failed miserably to proper express her vision to the experts. And notice how the idea chart she showed to the expected was an ugly mishmash, but the one she showed her friends was actually understandable? That's called cheating by the narrative.
I'm just counting the hours for the 'possession sue browbeats the three of them' fanfic to appear on the site .
Given that Chrysalis had attacked Equestria three times already, and in the last two attacks had struck at Ponyville, this was a very real worry for them.
Four times if you count Guardians of Harmony.
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My opinion is divided on Guardians of Harmony. It has some fun moments, but is so obviously a cheap and dirty attempt to follow a specific toy selling mandate. Maybe I should edit it to "several."
The important point, after all, is that Ponyville has obviously attracted the attention of Chrysalis, so they need a fairly secure Hive there. Of course the flip side of this is that the reason why it attracts her attention is the presence of Princess Twilight and the Elements there, so it's not exactly an easy place for her to attack either.
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He's showing up. In fact his role is quite important.
It is a Changelimg fic? If yes, I'm gonna have more of them in my collection. If not I'm gonna spoil your soul with other giant bug, because giant bug makes everything better. Sci-fi movies know that, so do 'Pestis Reginarum'
I love this opening chapter, and thanks for the recommendation! I like reading how the very snarky and sarcastic Queen Vespid is used here.
Will this get continued?