nice work

8174551 I'm glad you liked it. Sorry for the delay. I had a bit of trouble coming up with a few ideas with what I could add to the story

Its ok dude, we are patient and can wait, I only wonder if this going to be pattern? do you intent to this formula to continue with other options? because I would love to see what could you make with a love story between a human and princess Celestia.

Yeah it has being down before, you certainly have something that makes the story come to life

Excellent work i like this story especially because it's my very top favorite pony

8174786 thanks. After I've finished Rainbow Dash's and Pinkie Pie's version, I'll move onto Princess Celestia and then Luna and a few side characters. Thanks for explaining how my stories come to life

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Perfect I will wait for those

very nice work i love it

Very good i can imagine you did a Nightmare Night special of anthro Flutterbat

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I might actually do that. That'll make for a great sequel for this story

Yay

But when will it be out though?

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I think I'll try to publish it on Halloween/Nightmare Night. I've nearly finished it.

Sounds cool to me

Oh ... Fluttershy (blushing)

Don't get me wrong I liked this, but I feel like we were a little too ok with things. Like we go to sleep at home and suddenly we're laying in the street with an anthro pony sitting with our dog and we're just like "huh, neat"? I feel like we shoulda freaked out a little more. but otherwise this was good

i envy him

Don't edit this one I love the way this is written .

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I don't really have a choice right now my laptop is on the fritz and I got to get it fixed I'll talk with my editor when I got the time

I love that your redoing the mane 6. Thats really cool

Fluttershy I love you

love it, I can see that Genus has woke up to see an cute angel descend to his aid

So, the first human who's life didn't suck before being sent to Equestria.

Well I hope Discord wasn’t going to overprotective mode