lol wait did he even know it was silver spoon? XD dident seem to notice it lol eather way not a bad clopfic but still needs some work like in detail and a bit longer sex scenes lol but not bad i wana see more to this! maybe with more people and maybe it turns out more people are into this club of thiers and turns into a orgy XD
... This is ridiculous. It started out mid-serious, and it ended in a parody and-I don't even know what you're writing anymore. O_O Anyway, sorry to say that it doesn't come off as either funny or good clop. It's just a mess of things coming out of nowhere.
Awwww. Why is it always Mister Cake? He's just a poor baker.
Good, but short.
Good, but short.
931632
I just assume Zecora is Scootaloo's parent figure.
lol
wait did he even know it was silver spoon? XD
dident seem to notice it lol
eather way not a bad clopfic but still needs some work like in detail and a bit longer sex scenes lol
but not bad i wana see more to this!
maybe with more people and maybe it turns out more people are into this club of thiers and turns into a orgy XD
I can't tell if me gusta. Mostly because it has kids in it. Feels wrong, but it is so good.
931947
Seems legit, given the circumstances. Though I forever ship Applebloom and Zecora, just 'cause.
932356
What do you mean? I just tagged her to avoid spoilers.
932033
Ok, thanks.
Okay so I gotta ask this because it's going in my group and I refuse to read foalcon, is there underage sex in this?
933278
Uh, yes. Yes there is.
I hope to see more chapters. this was great!
... This is ridiculous. It started out mid-serious, and it ended in a parody and-I don't even know what you're writing anymore. O_O Anyway, sorry to say that it doesn't come off as either funny or good clop. It's just a mess of things coming out of nowhere.
Meinos Kaen
This would be creepy if I could actually take it seriously.
Ok i'll bite, wat happend to the story. It was getting good
937873
I need to work on other things, and be more serious when I write.
Aww, this was great! It's a shame it's cancelled.
Good god, you have to continue this! It's ludicrous and fun in all the right ways!