Canterlot school ... or better school xxx

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Dusk Star Shine

Dusk Star Shine #1 · Apr 26th, 2017 · · · The best school ·

Damn, now this is a GREAT story, but will there be some back story to how CHS turned into a XXX school/porn studio, also will any of the girls get pregnant from all of the sex they have?

twidash1993

twidash1993 #2 · Apr 26th, 2017 · 2 · · The best school ·

I'm sorry but you desperately need an editor this story looks like it was written in Google Translate

nickolas01

nickolas01 #3 · Apr 26th, 2017 · · · The best school ·

8122266
In fact, my friend ... this is translated into Google, I am from Chile and it is not easy to write in English ... in fact this message is translated and I need an editor ... the problem is that I do not know where I am

Dusk Star Shine

Dusk Star Shine #4 · Apr 26th, 2017 · · · The best school ·

8122383 Wow, sorry to hear that, I think it's written good and can't wait to see chapter 2 when you finish it.

Theponywriter22

Theponywriter22 #5 · Apr 27th, 2017 · · · The best school ·

8122383 I'll edit it if you send it to me.

nickolas01

nickolas01 #6 · Apr 27th, 2017 · · · The best school ·

8122818 Thank you friend, when you have the second chapter I will send

Theponywriter22

Theponywriter22 #7 · Apr 27th, 2017 · · · The best school ·

8122880 okay and no problem happy to help it's a good story

glennbyrnes

glennbyrnes #8 · Apr 27th, 2017 · · · The best school ·

You referred to Rarity as he. Is she a boy in this story?

Hudomi

Hudomi #9 · Apr 27th, 2017 · 1 · · The best school ·

Looking forward to the edited versions, the fic has incredible potential :D

mfkdso

mfkdso #10 · Apr 29th, 2017 · · · The best school ·

8122383 Está bien. Traductor de Google no es perfecto. Tal vez en la descripción que usted debe decir que usted es español, y que usted está haciendo su mejor. En una nota divertida, la última oración de ese comentario dice: "No sé dónde estoy".

Frankie2

Frankie2 #11 · May 1st, 2017 · · · The best school ·

Who is the 'he' in this story you keep referring to?

Dj Star Flight

Dj Star Flight #12 · Feb 16th, 2018 · · · The origin (part 1) ·

Either this was google translated from another language or english was never your first language when this was typed out.....might wanna burn this and redo it with better english. i can't even read this its so bad....not saying it can't be improved on it has potential.

Merlin Prime