• Member Since 22nd Nov, 2013
  • offline last seen 5 hours ago

Wildcard25


I used to question the MLP FiM show, but one episode and I got hooked on it. See my Fanfiction account ChaosMagemon for more than just MLP fics. Joined the Herd Nov 5, 2011

Comments ( 444 )

Ooooooh a New storie *sqeee* insta like and follow!:pinkiehappy:

"Oh horse apples," Applejack replied, "Remember that there tight white blouse ya wore last week? You had the top few buttons undone just so you can show off them fancy cans ya got there."
"I deny that accusation!" Rarity shot up.

Ha ha ha:rainbowlaugh: that was great.

Also Nurse luna:twilightoops: oboy...im not sick any more.
Keep up the great work can't wait for more:heart:. Love from sweden.

I really like this but that whole scene where Spike was home with Celestia, Luna and Cadance felt a lot like this- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7_HVSU7NK5E . Other than that I really like this first chapter and cant wait to see more!

Not a bad start man ill see where this goes. I also got a couple ideas for story arcs if your interested.

7574689 KO awesome story, Spike as a theft like the anime show mouse is awesome. Wonder if the Spike is going to have more girls working with him. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:
By the way, whatever happened to Shining Armor?

7574861 All will be told as the story progresses

...MLP/Mouse crossover?

7575002 Well spoof is the correct term, but more or less

7575014
Ah. Was just checking if I recognized the material.

Can't wait to see what you have for the next chapter. Origin stories maybe?

7575167 The ladies will get their origins

With Iron Will in this I hope Spike knows what he's doing.

Oh look, it's Mouse. My dad wasn't a fan of the show himself, but I happen to like the premise. I expected Iron Will to rhyme like he sometimes does just to make things more over the top, but you can't have everything in life.
Anyways, good luck.

7575907 Why didn't your pop like it?

7575916 Well, he wasn't a fan of the voice acting, he thought the dynamic between the master thief and his (... Assistants?... Helpers?... Fangi- I never watched much of the show or read much of the manga, sorry) was cliched (a guy's a master thief, yet somehow has a hard time with women), and... I can't remember much else.
I thought it was interesting, though, so maybe I'll give it another shot one of these days.

interesting that it seems that cadence is not only Flurry Heart's mom but Twilight's as well...its new.

How will Twilight finds out that Spike is Dragon??

7575938 Well Spike only acts like he's bad with his assistants around school but at home he ravishes in it.

7575966 I figured this was the case, considering the M-rating.

I freaking love it and the dialogue ere so well written that we cannot that the story in our head imagined itself.

Mouse hahahaha!!!!:rainbowlaugh:

So is this a mix of harem and phantom thief kid/ Kaito Kid?

7577803 That's one thief genre anime, but it's mostly like the anime Mouse

7578193 like and favorited that's all I got to say about this story great job hope to see more soon.

Thank You for making this, I like the mouse anime, also, for chapter ideas, after the twelve episode story, after that you could do your own thing like continuing the story in your own way though, maybe having Spike reveal his identity to the six and they then join his team, and your version of the man who cheats death, They together learn his weakness to take him out once and for all and a story chapter where Spike saves the chief and warms up to him and calls off his chase to capture him, and then stories were spike and the girls just hang around like the manga you can read online which I recommend you check out for more story chapter ideas, and for like the final few chapters, Spike as a father with his wife or wives and son or kids showing him the ropes of his families legacy.

Great story now this is stuck in my head.

I have one word for you my good sir......


MOAR!!!!!!!!

To me that seemed to go from zero to a hundred in a millisecond, honestly it freaked me out but in the good way.

7578193 I saw a bit of mouse but I like it.

7580764

That's an awesome idea. And for the record, I had to see where this was coming from, and I tell you, I am not disappointed at all!!! And even better, it was at a time before those (in my opinion--crackheaded) Japanese censorship laws came into play. And it was licensed for North America, so for the most part it's uncensored and dubbed in English. Seeing chapter one of this, and then seeing the episodes on YouTube, got to hand it to you, definitely a hit with what you are using.

One quick question, and I know it's probably obvious, but are all of the characters anthropomorphic (meaning furry, but human bodies)? I can see the tag, but sometimes Anthro just means that they just have the wings or furry ears, but everything else is humanized. I just have to know.

7604975 They're pure human. Spike's alias and costume makes him look part dragon

KO awesome chapter, can't believe that Twilight's parents and Shining Armor are dead in an accident or killed by someone. Hope Spike can comfort her and bring her to the thieving gang. When are we gonna see some sex/lemon scene? :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

7604980 KO so when are we gonna see some sex scenes dude, that would cool also will Twilight and the gang join Spike of thieving?

7612325 The girls will join him some time but not right away.

Very nice! Can't wait for the next chapter!

7612334 KO what about the sex scenes like fucking and all???

7612334 KO your story is awesome but wondering when are we gonna see some lemon scenes of sex????

7612510 There will be some, just don't get over excited.

"Not really. You have any idea how hard it is being a teacher at my age, especially when you're teaching students no older than you?" Celestia said nothing, allowing Spike to continue, "A lot of them don't take me seriously and try to walk over me. I really have to go full disciplinarian on a majority of them to keep them in line. Especially the boys. The girls however... Seem to listen to me, but not for my lessons."

I guess you could call him The Shorty Professor.

"Twilight, we may be childhood friends, but you can't forget I am the professor and I have to set an example to my students. Which means you are to address me as Professor Lupin."

Good thing this isn't a Negima homage, or he'd probably get a punch to the face for his troubles.

Spike sighed, "Ms. Modesta, what did we say about bringing animals into school?"

Heh, that made me chuckle.

"Philanthropist? Yeah right," Spike scoffed, "He only does charity work for the fame and riches."

Considering the recent movie and comic, I suppose that's somewhat plausible. RIP, "Filthy Rich isn't that bad of a guy" headcanon.

Anyways, see ya.

7612650 KO cool, can't wait to see how Spike gives pleasure and a good time with his girls.

You definitely have the persona in hand, well done on your part. Definitely seems like you really did your research with Mouse--every character you ponified so far have been right on the money--and dare I say, I really like the fact that you adapted the three students in the anime/manga into the Mane 6 in their wierd and quirky ways.

And to respond to the call of intimate scenes, I'm in agreement with you--that can come later. Right now I'm looking forward to seeing how Dragon gets his Prize.

....I'm a little surprised that Spike didn't make his trademark " The [insert priceless artifact here] is mine!!" line after introducing the Amulet...Guess he'll say that after he's successfully swiped it.

And that's really down the line, but could there be a chapter where Dragon is caught and locked up, but then Twilight helps Dragon's assistants in getting him out. Yes, I realize if that happens, it would mean that Twilight knows Spike Lupin is Dragon, as well as knowing that Principal Equestrius, Nurse Equestrius and Ms. Cadenza are Celestia, Luna, and Cadence--Dragon's accomplices. How would she personally respond to that?

7613910 Twilight and the others will eventually discover the truth, but not right now

Seriously this has inspiration of Sly Cooper considering that Spike is stealing back relics that rightfully belong to his family.

Dude, words cannot express how much I love this......do t ever stop man. Keep the updates coming.

Damon I thought people forgot about mouse. I love it!

Very impressive chapter. Nice touch with having Cadence flirt with Spike by sticking her butt out and giving him a shot of her pink panites. Very nice.

I would love some cover art for this story showing spike in his thief outfit.

Login or register to comment